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"Brian Johnson. Nice to meet you Misty. That's an interesting name."
"I'm an interesting woman. Now cut the chitchat and get that foot on the pedal. You drive like my granny."
Brian took an instinctive liking to Misty and had a feeling that they would be seeing a lot more of each other. He'd finally found someone to talk to. They sped off down the highway together, awaiting the unknown.
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Thanks to everyone for continuing to read my story, I appreciate all the feedback I've received.
- COMMENTS
_Lynn_about 15 years agoit's creepy. Can't wait for more though. Kudos, my friend.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoLoving it so far, but it seems you rushed things a little in chapter 4. It was all well until he met his dad, and then that confrontation blew through in half a second. Then he met the girl, and you just raced through that. I would've liked to see some reaction on his behalf about seeing another living being for the first time in over a week. Also, she seemed much too perky for someone living the same horrors as he has for the past week, and not shocked at all about seeing another person for the first time in over a week as well.
Like I said though, I wouldn't have read this far through all 4 chapters if I didn't love the story.
Eagerly awaiting chapter 5 :D.
kimbaleeabout 15 years agoLove the addition of the new character, and I can see them playing of each other very well. Great writing as usual, you never disappoint. And yes, you still scare the shit out of me, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoWell, I didn't find it confusing as yet, it's shaping up nicely actually. Top notch writing and a wonderful plotline - very well done.
PrincessErinover 15 years agoOnce again an intriguing story. I'm very confused about exactly what is going on which might be frustrating for other readers but I will keep reading. Great writing, no problems there.
