All Comments on 'It Is Not What I Want You To Do...'

Excellent first post. You write well and the touches of everyday life and their effect on her expectations bring the characters to life. I look forward to reading more from you.

Please be careful to rag for edgier things like the choking. (Blood, knife, gun, pee and scat, too). These are a problem for many people. I was very with you until that and it stopped the story cold. I am not even going to vote as my gut screams one and my mind recognizes it deserves more.