All Comments on 'It’s a Brave New World Ch. 09'

I keep waiting for Zeppelins. ;-)

Just wanted to leave you a note to say that I am enjoying the story.

It wouldn't take much for a society to be twenty years one way or another. However, there is some belief that the Black Death moved technology forward as there was a shortage of human labour. Meanwhile, the Spanish Flu saw a huge advance in medicine.

Conversely, World War II, brought food rationing to Britain until 1954. It would really have had to been messed up by the Pale Plague.

All good though -- not disagreeing with your alternate world at all -- just chatting.

Great story I just find I'm just getting into the story and the chapter ends.

Just discovered this and can't imagine waiting so long for updates. Love it and hope it comes soon. Basic idea for pairings so far is Abby, Cindy, Mandy and Becky. Becky because all those concentrated pheremones in a small space? ;)

Your writing shows your intelligence.