All Comments on 'It’s a Brave New World Ch. 10'

...but PLEASE get an editor or proofreader. There were dozens of instances of missing words, doubled words, spelling, grammar an punctuation problems throughout.

Thanks for another great chapter!

i was really getting into your story then it stops. are you going to finish it or like so many others let it die where it is?

Please continue as soon as you can. This is an Awesome read.

Still waiting or are going to let everyone down.

There's more to come surely ??

Fantastical. Great short story ending.

Thanks for a very fun read! I hope all's well with you and that you will write more on this story and others.

Just finished reading this and I hope you pick it back up and continue. Awesome loved it

This series just hooked me and I blazed through all ten chapters. We need you to pick this back up.

Please!

Please continue this great story!

I just found this series and read it all in one night. Incredible world building. Please write more. I'd buy this book.

Wow what a great story!

Please continue! I just found this story and it is wonderful.

This is a great yarn. I hope it is developed to a satisfactory conclusion. Who has the film rights?

Sex scenes are great, but the world building was awesome as well. I would buy this if it were a book. Want to know what happens next!

My 2 cents

Awesome story! Too bad you didn't continue it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Yes was a very good story but looks like there won't be more too bad about that hope they are okay. Life takes turns at times.

Got to say I was really drawn into the whole multiverse and potential interdimensional war. The sex was great but the story as a whole was a talk page turner. Sorry to see that it didn’t get finished but I appreciate what you did share with us.

why so many good tales STOP 23@#$%$#@F..K

why so many good tales STOP %$#@F..K

Fantastic Story! Would love to see more added…. For now it will go in my “unfinished” bookmarks..

Awesome. Looking forward to more

While I wish there was another book coming, I know there probably isn't. Still, that was a ripping yarn!

Just found this story, and found it very good. The alternate universe idea can lead to vary diverse plot lines, from H. G. Wells, Robert Heinlein, and many others. You have taken the idea and created a great story. Would really like to read the rest of the story! One small issue, in our dimension Grover Cleveland was on the Green Seal $ 1000 note. This was printed in 1928, therefore should of had continuity in your post plague timeline.