All Comments on 'It’s a Brave New World Ch. 01'

by StupidlyOptimistic

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lefriclefricover 9 years ago
must continue!

You have piqued my interest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!

:D Yep. More.

trashmantxtrashmantxover 9 years ago
Do it

Do it again

Maybe he should knock on a friends door...or check his bank account?

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

could have been longer to explain the set up or maybe he is still passed out dreaming this crap.

Wildman28Wildman28over 9 years ago
you've got my attention

I'm interested to see where you go with this. The start didn't really give the reader much to go on where this story is going but it also leaves you a lot of room to expand it. I look forward to seeing where u go with this

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 9 years ago
ok ...you got me too...

just like the others commentors here...so....we'll just wait for the next chapter and see where this will be going...

Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 9 years ago
And you hooked another.

just like the other posters, i to am hooked, and can't wait for the next chapter. I agree that this intro could have been a bit longer, and include some of the explanation, but it does give you a bit of time to flesh out any little quirks you might want to include in this universe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
=|

Not a fan of pubic hair, good story though=]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Do not read until 2050.

The story has a good plot but StupidlyOptimistic only writes a few pages a year. If this story arch is any indication we are barely past the introduction after 3-4 years of posted chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

I just stumbled on this story. It's quite good. And a fresh premise, something new on Literotica.

IjustcantstopIjustcantstopabout 4 years ago

Well it's not 2050, but you got another sucker hooked

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I found this site about 10 years ago, and have really enjoyed the countless stories on this site. I started writing about 5 years ago. I'm not particularly fast, so I didn't turn out too many chapters. Unfortunately, I had a change of careers about 8 months ago (just before ...

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