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All Comments on 'It Started as a Date Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
If she is a slut ...

What does that make the protagonist? A delusional rapist?

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 10 years ago
Get an editor!

There were so many problems in just the first paragraph that I had to force myself to read on. Two more paragraphs loaded with problems later, I gave up.

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