by scorpio415
Great story, it had everything it needed, Love and Lust, he made it a loving experience for her first time.
Your story had the right amount of build up before their lovemaking, I say lovemaking because that is what is was not just another fuck story.
Thanks
Sorry I meant to say you could have described her body for your story, that's why I only gave it four stars.
Your story is simply amazing I love how he made her feel truly special and I can't wait to hear more if you choose to continue this storrybecause I definately want much more of cole