All Comments on 'It Started Online'

It seems that sis knew just what to do and was the best thing for them. I like the way that she fooled him into thinking that he was being judged for an internet lover, when she all along was looking at the very long term love. Thanks for the story....Rich

I really enjoyed reading this story. Please continue to write more stories like this one. I hope you write more stories soon.

Nice short story, now write it again, and make it a few pages longer, add more detail. The concept is very interesting... You get a 5 star anyway..