All Comments on 'It Started with a Kiss'

Something calm and gentle, yet with the anxiety of new love. Well done. Don't stop with just this one...

Looking forward to more. Many thanks for your efforts.

from reading this story and i might add enjoying it,is there something in her past perhaps?More please

Great story, a sequel would be the crowning touch. You need to write more, you have a nice flow in your writing

Alex, I have read most of your stories here, and this is another great one! I would like to see a sequel to this story! I look forward to your next submission here, whether or not it is a sequel.

Great read! A sequel would be a boon.

Hope this story continues...can not wait to see if it does go farther.

While the story ended at a high point, it is short of a fully satisfying narrative.

A well structured story, and well written.

Please let us have a second chapter at least because there must be more to this couple's love story

What I liked most was how quickly I felt for, and really liked, the characters. I would also like to read more about them.

Thanks for taking the time to develop the story-line. You have talent!

Thanks, Alex, for a damned good story.

HP

Lovely piece of literature here. Excellent!

This was a very well written story and fun to read. I was enjoying the various situations that showed "real" persons. It seemed that all locals knew each other or were related, and all liked Jack. I did, too, and almost forgot that this was an erotic tale and that there had been no sex when it happened....and, it was good. Thanks for providing one of your best.

Really enjoyed the story, but I'm wondering about Roxanne's past.There was just a hint of something but it was gone in a heart beat. For such a lovely creature as she is to still be single and living with her parents begs for answers. Maybe in the next chapter, if there ever is. Thanks

One of your better writings, you have a great knack when it comes to Romance.

Nice, sweet story. Reminded me a bit of "Ex Libris", a few of the lines seemed to be similar (the one that stuck out for me that both the ladies served their date prawn and melon starters with white wine). But a good read overall.

If I may make a small criticism, it felt to me that there were too many characters that did not seem to add to the story much.

You wove a beautiful story but left us hanging. Romance doesn't end with sex.

Very well written, a pleasure to read, but it stops too abruptly. Please continue with the story.

I can get into a story that doesn't have what some other stories have..

how do you envy a fictional person?

After I got into reading the story it seemed very familiar. Sure enough, it was a little over eight years ago that I first read this story, thing is I still love it. Had me smiling just about all the way through it. I guess after eight years and you haven't added another chapter, probably means there won't be another one. Too bad because this story has so much potential and love to offer.

Anyway, thanks again for a great story.

Nice story. Very well written. Thanks.

I keep liking your writing style more and more. So sorry for your loss. It's your readers loss as well.