All Comments on 'It Starts With Abuse'

Great story. A little to direct. But great otherwise. But plenty of options to expand. Please do

that was so tender and romantic i mean omg that was just an epic romantic story i hope you keep it going

5 Stars for sure, a VERY GOOD read!!! I do not agree with the one that said it was a little to direct. I think the directness helped make the story a great read. I feel that there is a lot more to come from this. Please do not make us wait too long. Looking forward to more chapters.

Needs a lot of editing, but please continue.

How lucky he has Ben and Ben's great hairy chest to love and protect him. What a fine catch Ben is. Keep up the great writing! More details!

Daddies s/b daddy's

Your s/b you're

Is your name Maverick, or is that a characteristic of your demeanor?

OMG, don't get me started on the missing punctuation. And all of that was found in just the first four paragraphs. The plot, like your writing, is too fast and sloppy! You turned what could have been an entertaining read into choppy, subpar drivel.

Slow down, take your time and make it good for all of us.

Their will be a part 2! with more detail

The writer is experiencing a lot of life problems at the moment and the story is delayed

Such a good story, it was really heart warming. I really hope for a part 2

I've been looking for this story everywhere!! I love it so much, such romance and caring, enough to make anyone fanboy over it ;)

What's with all the "bud"? He might as well say, i love ya dude. So romantic...not.

No way sucking dick the day after your nose is broke and reset. It is full packed with gauze and a splint on it to hold it back in place. You have to take antihistamines because a sneeze could rebreak it. No way he could breathe. Love to know how after a few minutes of a couple fingers you have no pain getting your first dick I. Your ass when the guy is hung and needs magnum condoms. Hope you keep it u. It make it more believable

S to the other guy with the issue of him saying Bud. They are teen guys and one is a jock. This is how they would talk.