All Comments on 'It Stays in Vegas'

by JennyX3

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BenLongBenLongalmost 12 years ago
NIce beginning!

Hot little story; liked it a lot. Needs a few touches to make it an award winner, but great first effort! Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

This could easily extend into a second or third story for all three of them.

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 12 years ago
Definitely ripe for a second chapter

Very well-written and extremely sexy. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
wife

I should be so lucky to meet up with someone like you.

My wife probably needs a great sexy woman to eat her out and fist fuck her.

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