by Sexymommakat
i did enjoy the story but found that it read like a dream sequence, that may have been your intention, in which case i'll shut up. the fact that it was written as though it was happening right now, didn,t make me feel as though it was real. that is the only reason i gave it an average score. the descriptions were very good however.
The Beach and the picnic and the water was delicious but not nearly as delicious as you Kat