All Comments on 'It Was Father's Day'

hmmm...very good start...hoping the adventure will continue

great gift! fun and sexy little story.

A story about a loving couple is a rare find, a hot one, like this, is even rarer. Fan-fucking-tastic!!! Keep up the good work. Damn, makes me think I need a wife like that. :D

Long time reader, first time commentor.

I really liked that it seemed like a real story with realistic characters and plotting. I'm thinking BBQ for dinner tonight...

...and I don't mean the meat! So nice to read a sexy story that in this category that actually is about loving wives (and loving husbands)... loving relationships.

I hope to read more from you.

In fitting with the Loving Wives tradition, the sequel will see our happy couple in a three way with Rob, their recently single and life-long black neighbor who contrary to Loving Wives tradition will have a smaller dick than the husband, proof of which is the Harley which Rob uses to compensate for his shortcoming.

Grab the popcorn...

in the beginning he had on no underware, then in the middle of the story she reached into his boxers

The boxer flap is on the lounge pants. My hubby has a pair. :)

Literate and good English but far too short and no plot development. Good potential; pay more attention to gradual plot development.

I loved it, yet It was too short. I would've wished to have read more, but it was great. I would've never guessed anyone would use a bottle. Guess I'm not as experienced as I thought. I really hope there's a sequel coming.

My opinion...forget the guy who said you need to work on "plot development!" If you were writing a novel, yes. For here...your story was absolutely perfect! In fact, I'd love to see more and more! It was to the point, got right to the goods and when it was over, it was over! Great job!

We do not really have fathers day in the old cuntry,the only thing remotely like is Mothers Day which is about 9 months after the so called Fathers DAY

A Father's Day without any evidence Hubby is a Father, nor that their actions are likely to make him one. Yes, 'family' is mentioned once but that could be his or her parents or siblings, etc.

In all fairness, any excuse for sexual rowdiness is good (sometimes Great!) This sounds like one of the Great times until Hungry Harley guy rumbles up! I guess with a little more Mike's Hard, that could have escalated to Superb times, but maybe they 'don't play well with others!' Alas...but a good kinky (and cool) tale nonetheless!

4*

But I would be very careful waving my meat around a hot grill.