All Comments on 'It Won't Be A Dream'

I wish I had a lover who would do that to/for me.... Fantastic! Got my heart rate up and my pussy wet.

Welcome to Lit and what a first story it is! I hope you get your wish/fantasy. I'm pretty sure whatever woman you share this with, it will be mutual. I think other men should take a hint from your writing and slow things down a bit. I know many women who would appreciate a conscientious lover such as the protagonists in your stories.

~Luna

wow x 3

I have difficulty finding words. Maybe you had good conversations with women or read the Vagina Monologues or SOMETHING but whatever it was, congrats!

If only more people realized that,often, all you need is this simple, sincere stuff as opposed to the wild and kinky stuff to make a woman happy ^_^

also: nicely written; only comment I'd make is that I don't think you need the quotation marks around the speaker's words. For the 'you' character, the quotations are good and necessary, but for the speaker I think the piece works just fine without 'em.

Wow! I should not have read this at work as I'm ready to go!!

That was unbelievably hot. My nipples hardened and my heart sped up all without a touch. Literotica at its best! THANK you! xo