All Comments on 'It's Against the Law Ch. 02'

Where the hell did this 1950s crap come from? The commenter seems to be trying to make a point - and missed by a mile. Enjoying the tale, looking forward to the rest. Thank you.

somewhere east of Omaha

@ thevikingsailor, you might be right but a quick Google search will provide the facts that the last time it was used in Illinois was in the 1990s. So not as outlandish as you may think. That case btw didn't go to prosecution, but that was never really the point. It was being arrested and put in the papers that was the motivation.

Seems so 1950s, the MC is square beyond belief. It's 2023, morality and actions are not defined by religious tenets. Of course the wife can't talk to the husband about sexually deviant stuff. It's idiotic to expect otherwise. If your husband is 1950s he's not going to positively react to finding out his wife is 50 shades of grey anymore than most people would, even today, positively respond if their wife brought up scat or watersports. It's not only an embarrassing subject but something that many LW writers and commenters would consider grounds for divorce just by thinking about it.

I'm getting too old for cliff hangers, lol, so I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter. Liked the story, lots of heartache and tears on both sides so far. I think some people just need to chill about the legality of what happened, after all it is fiction, right?

You are an excellent storyteller and up to this point it is very well-written with one glaring exception: the scene leading up to and including the arrest. That sucks like February. The law-enforcement agency assigns two officers plus one sergeant, plus a DA to write a warrant, to arrest two people screwing? And lead them away in handcuffs? Ridiculous. The chief will get laughed out of office. And imagine it ever going to trial. Bias and interest (i.e. any possible inclination of a witness to favor or oppose one side or the other) is almost always admissible. "Officer are you now or have you ever been in an adulterous relationship? Are other officers on your force in such relationships and do you intend to participate in their arrests? Does your wife engage in such activities or does she fantasize about it?" The judge might disallow some of these questions but he cannot prevent the lawyer from asking. Or the audience from laughing. Or the press from reporting. If you republish, have Dalton and Jack set them up to get caught and photographed in a park, B & D club or one of their houses. Or something. Just not an arrest. Other than that and in spite of that, top scores all around.

Thanks for your writing.

re btrying and the sense of loss due to infidelity.

At 17 I lost my Dad. He went to work one day and at 10:00 am they carried him out to the morgue. I was beside myself with shock and grief.

At 18 my girlfriend who had helped me through the bad days after my Dad's death broke up with me. I was again grief stricken But this loss was worse than losing my Dad. Why?

My Dad was dead. He was never coming back. I would never bump into him on the street. I would never get a phone call from him asking to reconcile. I would never see him again. I could never dream of him coming back. All of these things I could not do to ease the loss of my Dad, I tortured myself with in the vain hope I might just even see or hear my girlfriend. Death is final. Breaking up is not.

However, through those 2 incidents I did learn to switch love off like a light. Or more correctly, I realized love is a two way street between two people. If one end disappears, everything flows out that vacant end. What you are left with are fears, uncertainty, memories, broken dreams and unfulfilled hopes. All the good things you shared are now just memories. Its your choice whether they become painful memories, or another valuable learning experience.

All the commenters shouting weakness and such because the MC Dalton feels sadness at his loss act like they've never lost a loved one. The intensity of the grief when losing a spouse to infidelity is no less than that when a loved one dies. All the bravado is so misplaced and misguided. Normal humans don't turn love on and off like a light. Pathetic. Thanks for an engaging fictional tale. John

I hope the new development isn't that she's pregnant. That cliche is too common. Let's see....

Bel is a whore. No woman that is engaged should have dinner with another man. Hope to see that slut get some payback in the next chapter.

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Keep going, the story line is getting better.

Honestly this story works better as a reconciliation. She was scratching a kink itch and was terrified her husband would think she was a skank. Yeah it went way too far she should have told him. Still this isn't exactly a love affair. I would love to see this story handled differently where the husband's heart was softened. -starsong1977

Time to quit reading. He is pervert but she isn't?!!! Both engaged in same act. Bawl some more and ask if you can watch and lick out the cream. jtwheels

Well, The tale was good. However, I feel a reconcilliation coming on. What the fuck. Oh well.

Dalton is way too nice! Why is it that the only person in the story with balls is the villain?

Beautiful suite.5⭐

you convey the feelings well.

Even without penetration, she lied, cheated, and didn't trust her husband enough by being afraid of his judgment.

On the other hand, she takes all the responsibility.

Thank you for sharing.

Glad Dalton is a real man.

God, was she stupid and pushed on by the shithead Irving, Very well written but does need editing. The line," she drove away, dragging our dreams behind her", is really poignant! 5*s.

Why worry about her? She didn't care enough about him not to cheat on him. Even though they didn't fuck, it's still cheating if it can't pass the spouse test. (If you wouldn't do it in front of your spouse, then it's cheating.)

God it's heart breaking, so much pain all around, and you have written it so well. Damn good writing. Even though it's hard to read I can't stop and I'm feeling all the pain the characters are feeling. I'll move on to the next chapter and see what more befalls these characters.

Why do all of the authors here on literotica think that love automatically turns a man into a pussy??

...when he said got is not a word.

It's in several online dictionaries.

For example, Collins Dictionary cites numerous newspaper uses of got.

Plus other examples.

Paul in Oklahoma

stop grilling streaks, the are bad for ya. u do know "got" is not a word right? u use that a lot in ur stories, try rephrasing the sentence

"if I liked it, then I'd tell you and see if you'd be open to trying it." - But, as it turned out, she was STILL afraid to bring it up! The point being, if she had the intent of bringing it up at some future, the same risk would be there, so the "trying it out" excuse is meaningless.

In spite of her rationale of keeping her husband at a distance as a "defense mechanism," she at least owed her husband a loving relationship.

@Anonymous Re: "Sorry but" - "Too much effort put in trying to illicit sympathy for the wife." Sheesh! So many times we get complaints because the wife's feelings aren't shown, now we get on and that one gets bitched at!

I have never seen a women who right or wrong, that when pushed into a situation that she doesn't like, will not fight like the devil themselves. Its true, they can be angels, when they want to be, but damn, they can be devils as well. Sorta reminds me of how close love and hate are, very thin line. Just can't see someone so hot blooded like Jean appears to be, to suddenly plays dead, because she was in the wrong.

It's obvious which ones have been cheated on, and which ones have no idea what that feels like.

The ones whining that "She didn't cheat because there was no penetration" are talking out of their collective asses.

Anyone that has had the love of their life betray them will tell you, the worst pain is not from knowing physical sex took place, the worst pain is from the betrayal itself. The contempt shown in all the planning and lying. The knowledge that the person you built your life around could so seamlessly lie to your face. That she thought so little of you of the love you felt for her, that a quick fuck in a sleazy motel meant more to her.

Yeah, the guy in this didn't shove his cock into her. So what. The exact moment she told herself that seeing this guy was more important than hurting her husband, that's when the cheating started. Everything after was just indulgence.

Too much effort put in trying to illicit sympathy for the wife.

You have done the same in other stories. The wife goes into excruciating detail describing her affair, how wet she got, how it was the best sex ever, (hell, I could nearly visualize her playing with herself while talking), while in the same breath, begging for forgiveness. It's not realistic. Every time she features after that, is spent trying to get sympathy for an unsympathetic character. If it was once, if she had gotten drunk and was taken advantage of, then maybe sympathy would be warranted. But not when it was a planned affair that went on over a year, and was only escalating. Too many stories try to minimize it by saying "Oh but we never actually had full intercourse." That doesn't matter. It's still cheating, even if it was just a kiss. She went looking for it, planned for it, made all the arrangements for it, and carried it out. Every step was cheating.

Jean sounds like the perfect cheating wife!!! So overcome with remorse that she signed the divorce papers without even reading them!!! Every divorced husbands dream!!!

Of a press photographer, one more talent that I don't have. "Ah, well I'm just about to leave here; could you meet me at the Dew-Drop-Inn on Mannheim and Touhy in about half an hour?" Over the years I've read quite a few stories with Dew Drop Inns, I wonder how many there really are. Years ago a ate a number of meals in one across the lake in Muskegon Heights. Don't see how Dalton had much choice but to make the phone calls. Signed: BTW

First you should look in the mirror and wonder why men are such wimps, now that that's out the way. Why go to a counselor, when no one has admitted to having any problems? You may be a mind reader but most people aren't, that includes women.So what need for counseling are you referring to?

maybe at first.

it was a series of mistakes. completely sober. in the light of day.

for over eight months she omitted truth from her husband. for eight months she was breaking their vows. for eight months another man was sharing her with him.

it's called 'emotional cheating'. and it's very real, and very destructive. and let's be honest...dry humping some guy in bondage is also physical cheating.

her only real mistake was when she decided it was okay to hide fantasies from her husband that she was going to play out with another. once she decided that, it was all deliberate and planned cheating.

Why are all the men such wimps, BUT, I will say this, I think I would have tried counciling first. She had a problem that they maybe could have gotten help with, bring it on trolls.

She put him in a horrible position. He is making the smart choice. Trust is gone.5

Drown your sorrows in alcohol

Cry your eyes out

Still love her.

Just dump the bitch

Sorry but the way you write him nothing but a wimp

Can't talk about it to you but OK to cheat with some one else

Who wants a wife like that

Hope Irv comes for.him so he can some.personal payback. Jean needed to go, she cheated and lied to him for months. Glad he didn't wimp out.

For months she treats him with contempt,snapping at him and avoiding love making. Then when she is discovered, she loves him more than life itself and is a total wreck. How can the two adulterers have just played, without having sex! Time after time he would have had to leave with "blue balls" and she with soaking panties. Not likely - and still nothing for hubby no matter how turned on she is. Her explanation to Dalton does not ring true. And yes, Dalton cries too much! 4*s.

But too many repetitions in dialogue.

Not a big fault, I know but

irritating to read.

4 out of 5 from me.

OK, she made a mistake but what she did wasn't just the infidelity. Her guilt (?) caused her to be pretty unpleasant to Dalton on a day to day basis. From that alone, his life was sucking.

She made a major life decision, continuing to work, apparently based on her ability to be with Irv.

She made an even more major life decision, putting off having children, possibly based on it getting in the way of her extra-curricular activities.

I think Dalton should have asked her if the bondage caused these actions. Or did her ambivalent feelings towards her life cause the bondage?

...is in the words. Here's my favorite from this story:

" then I watched as she drove away dragging our dreams behind her."

Good depth and flow. The amount of time hubby is trying not to hurt her says a lot to. If everything flows right, I see reconciliation in the future. I am not a BTB, or RAAC type of person, as each story has its own merits.

I am enjoying this story. Thanks.

Dalton cries more than a schoolgirl. Snowflake character written by a snowflake author. Man up

... But not afraid enough to live them with someone else.

That, in a nutshell, is why Jean didn't deserved to be loved by Dalton. If you have to be a slut, you be a slut with your husband, and no one else (unless he's such a simp, he would be OK with you doing so with another guy - no respect for that, but hey, that's your life.)

I get the pain, though - all the pain, touching so many people, over this act of betrayal... as usually, it is never worth all that torment.

Doesn't look like this is going to turn into a RAAC narrative, but you never know... Let's all root for a righteous ending, not necessary a happy one.

But having an affair and cheating is not compatible with love. It deliberately causes so much pain that you would never think of doing that to someone you love.

I think I'm enjoying this more than the first time I read it. Five stars. An angle you could have taken . . . Once someone gets into bondage, it is pretty hard to drop it. When people reconcile after an affair, they do find ways to have sex again. However, she would almost definitely, at least at some point, want to do bondage with hubby, and there is absolutely no way he could bring himself to do that considering how she first got into it.

Hubby is doing several things that could look bad for him if revealed in court. I don't trust Belinda. I don't think Jean should be forgiven. But she was raped the first time. In fact, in my opinion, any sex that occurs while one partner is tied, handcuffed, blindfolded and gagged should be considered as rape. It cannot be considered consentual. She was gagged. She could not tell her attacker, "No!"

Well, written, excellent premise, good characters, but pretty harsh.B35E

If you haven't read anything but this one scenario then try reading some of my other work and let me know. "Return to Chicago," "Weaver," "Welcome Home," "Hero," all come to mind.

In all the stories I have read so far, the betraying part in a relation is Always the woman while the man is Saint like even though he is unforgiving and out for revenge on both the betraying people. He/she (Author) wants to see his/her partner grovelling Before even thinking of taking him or her back, all the time telling how sad he is for the pain caused to his/her supposedly beloved.

Talk about a double standard.

Sounds like real life sort of.

I know I'm probably repeating what others (including me!) have said, but two things bother me about Jean:

1 - There were innocent ways that she could have broached the subject with Dalton with little to no risk to their relationship.

2 - The MINUTE Irv violated their agreed upon limits, he violated one of, if not THE, prime tenets of BDSM, and she should have ended it RIGHT there. Then she could either find a way to talk about BDSM with DALTON, or forget about it.

I have read this before and may have commented. What we have here is literally a major failure to communicate. Irv was just looking for some strange. From what I've read and seen, BDSM or the "Lifestyle" as I've heard it discussed is 99% based on trust. Trust that you can let yourself go and that the Dom won't breach your limits, hence the safe word. That is to let your partner know that they are either at or just about to breach the subs limits. The husband though was right in that the next thing would have been full penetration or intercourse as it were. She failed on all counts as what is a marriage, it is placing your trust fully in your partner. She should have gone to her husband first, failure number one, she only wanted it with her clothes on, he talked her out of them, failure number two, she felt guilt and disrespected her husband on so many levels it is just too many to count, failure number three. Then to top it off, failure number four was that she was willing to go on with irv to get her scratch itched just one more time when she realized that something was wrong with her spouse, but still went off with irv. All because she "couldn't" talk to her husband about her desires. She may not understand that it was a betrayal of her vows but as someone once said, if you can't do or say such a thing in front of your spouse then it is just plain wrong.

Should they have tried for counseling, maybe yes before throwing the baby out with the bath water but who knows.

Nothing new here. Just a cheating slut and her excuses.

I STILL don't understand, after Irv gagged her and went beyond their agreed upon boundaries, she didn't end it with him.

He had obviously shown himself an untrustworthy partner; I would even have doubts that he was being truthful about his wife, that his story wasn't just an excuse to get some strange!

Love the balance of emotion. No wimp, no hard ass just a husband who is devastated by his wife's betrayal but not cruel and a wife who is genuinely repentant and remorseful.

Congrats. Very imaginative. Five out of five. I really liked how this is developing. Stories about evil women who get what's coming to them are pretty common. But two people who are devastated when one of them makes a mistake are much more interesting.

As I predicted in my Ch. 1 comments (no, I didn't cheat and peak ahead) Jean was too afraid and embarrassed to tell her husband about her kinky fantasies. That is very believable. (My recommendation for anyone in that situation is start by putting on just a blindfold and see where it goes.) I liked how Dalton worries about Jean even as he is punishing her. That seems real to me. The reaction by the in-laws also seems very real.

As a constructive criticism there were a few typos and punctuation errors in this chapter, but nothing major or that an editor wouldn't catch easily. Since I'm not paying I'm not complaining.

I'm not sure where this story is headed. I have nothing against a BTB story that turns into a RAAC story if it makes sense. But if Dalton and Jean reconcile you have to brace yourself for the criticism of the rapid BTB fans. Cheers Steve

yet,

but I thought about it situations

Who among us has not been in a position of thinking about . . . .

Be honest with yourselves, where are you reading this?

This is NOT the Christian Science Reading Room.

(Is the reference to old?)

What if, when he learned that she intended to call it off, and when she invited him for a weekend away together, he had said why wait, let's go now, just the two of us, alone, to explore our passion and fantasies?

Someone said until the raid they had just talked.

Not true, the previous time after he gagged her he stripped and fingered her.

And even before THAT he was fondling her through her clothes.

“When I came home that night I wanted so bad to talk to you about maybe trying a little bondage but I was so embarrassed I couldn't bring myself to do it.” - Why? What’s the WORST that would happen? That he would say it was disgusting and never mention it again? Or, maybe, just MAYBE, he might say that HE was into it to, but was afraid to mention it? After all, Irv was into it but couldn’t bring it up to HIS wife, maybe Dalton is the same?

Once Irv gagged her so she couldn’t protest, then went beyond what they agreed to, she should have ended it RIGHT THERE!

LOL, If his car was car-jacked, and he wasn’t home, how could the police have hauled him in?

I know she blames herself and trusts Dalton, but she should STILL a lawyer to protect whatever interests she does have.

I can empathize to a degree with both of them. There have been times that I wanted to tell my spouse of things that I had done and seen during my military service, but since they were and still are classified I cannot and will not reveal them. She understands but it still put a strain at times past. On the other hand, my friend had some secrets of her own that she had told me about but, not her spouse. Nothing about our service but personal stuff. She too was embarrassed by them and only told me because I wouldn't let her back to duty until she told me. My advice to her was to open up to her spouse PDQ, as it could directly affect her relationship. She listened and while embarrassing she kept her relationship. In the end communication is the key and when you stop then I can almost guarantee an ending of said relationship.

She loves him so much? Bullshit! If you're trying to get us to feel sympathy for Jean, I got to tell you, it's an epic fail.

and there will be crumbs enough for all. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is like a bad accident, that you can't look away from. I can feel their emotional tumble from a life we are all hoping to achieve. That doesn't happen by chance!

Thanks your killing me.

there will always be distractions, TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm guessing we are finished with Jean. If I am correct, is Bel on the other end of the line? Three months is certainly enough time for her relationship to go wrong and for her to get over it enough to call him.

At no time in chapter 01 during the events at the motel did he ever talk to his wife. He did arrange for her to have her car at the jail when she got out. (the issue of bail is another matter not settled) and yet in chapter 02 you say

"I wondered if Jean made it home after being released from jail. She had nowhere else to go at that hour unless she stayed in a motel but I thought I'd made it clear that she should come home; after all, we had the terms of the divorce to discuss, no sense putting it off;"

If they never spoke, she was photographed, arrested, and jailed, just exactly when did he make it clear she could come home? and how should she have known they were to discuss the terms of a divorce? it seems to me that she might even feel a bit reluctant to come home at all considering how she was caught and the extent to which she was exposed while handcuffed, blindfolded, and tied to the bed when the police entered the room.

welcome home? not to my abode!

except for the grilled streaks. are they anything like racing stripes?

"God help me, at the same time I was more turned on than I'd ever been in my life."

At that point she KNEW she was hooked on BDSM. She didn't have to tell her husband she was into it, she could have broached the subject obliquely, something like, "Honey, I was talking to one of the girls at work, and she was telling me about some 'games' she plays with her husband, and it sounded kind of kinky, but fun! Do you think you might like to try it sometime?"

Worst case, he tells her he thinks it's sick and she has to decide if she loves her husband enough to drop it. Best case, he reacts positively.

The wife is ashamed to tell her husband she's interested in BDSM? Just log onto Amazon.com and buy him a set of Sportsheets and a copy of "BDSM for Dummies" for his next birthday.

now is the time for all good men to recuperate and rebound. TK U MLJ LV NV

except the author wimpyfied the guy. too damn much crying.

3 stars only because of the constant bawling, otherwise a 4 or 5 star for sure.

Going fine so far let's see

One thing I figured out early when I started reading the Literotica postings was to NEVER read commentary by the likes of Duna or Dworncock or Journar.

And now that I am finally posting stories, I KNOW I definitely will never waste anymore time on their gibberish, than scrolling on bye-bye!

I gave the first a 4 for style and readability=--could excuse some of the tears tho I thought there were too many--the second went straight downhill--like another said men just don't cry like that I hope it gets better

The Anon who said the wife was a good woman and the husband treat her like crap. Did you read the first and second stories you dumbass you sound like a person who should never use a computer again. Learn to think before writing something down that's making you sound retarted.

Author has to be a woman. Men don't cry like that. Yeah I'll agree that at some point tears would come, but this guy is crying 25 different times a day. Women may cry like that but men barely cry at a family members funeral much less 25 times a day because their wife cheated on them. This guy has been the poster for how not to live life. I understand marriage is important and the main thing in some peoples lives but to focus 100% of your energy and thoughts on your wife/marriage is highly naïve and a set up for big time failure. Never, ever place all of your happiness on another person as you will end up hurt or at the very least severely disappointed!!!

From Part 1, Dalton talking to Jack:

" ... I was there about twenty minutes when she came out holding hands with Irv Jackson, that's her boss."

From Part 3:

" ..."Mr. Conrad, I'm not trying to pick you up or anything like that, Irv Peterson was fired today and I just thought you should know...just in case he tries coming after you or something."

I will never understand what cheaters mean when they say " I love you & I never meant to hurt you" what exactly was supposed to happen when they're caught?!-- were they supposed to sit around the fire place/kitchen table holding hands & reestablish the lost trust? The husbands pity party for one is starting to get irritating, he didn't do a damn thing wrong--she did, yes he should feel hurt, anger, self pity & betrayed, but he shouldn't let the wife's betrayal cripple him. This story reads like a reconciliation story, she's really remorseful and he still wants her, there's nothing wrong with reconciliation, but I don't feel it for this story, the wife has been sharing something special with her douche bag co-worker regardless if penetration occurred or not it was only a matter of time before they consummated their relationship. The real question here is why the wife felt more comfortable doing those things with her co-worker than her husband? Why she was ok with allowing her co-worker to think of her as a slut but not her husband? What happens the next time the wife finds another thing she'd like to try? She didn't even think to talk to her husband, she wanted to try it out first with another man than do it with her husband but even then that's not what happened--that's like me allowing some strange guy to fuck me in my ass and me saying well I didn't want my husband to think I was a slut. There's nothing wrong with being a complete cum slut for your man.

The details of the bondage storyline reminds me of another story I recently read. Thanks for the offering.

About not caving on his aversion to cheating! So what happens the next she wants to do something she thinks Dalton won't like? Will she cheat again ?

grammar, spelling, convoluted plot.... still I wondered what grilled streaks taste like.

The character are great, the flow is very good and the premise is unique. I smell a reunion coming but it's your story so tell it the way you want.

What you did is wrong. I agree with the previous comments. I reported you to literotica moderators for violating their rules.

And you do owe this writer an apology for what you did, you fucked up his story with your selfishness.

Why are you ruining another writers story, and calling it advertising???

You are an asshole. If you want to advertise do it on your profile page not here.

You owe this writer a big apology for giving away the ending, and for using his story to promote yourself, I am reporting you to lit and hopefully others will join me in getting you banned

Shame on you.

You are a fucking ass, can't you keep your pie hole shut. What the fuck are you moviespoiler.com???????????

So shut the fuck up asshole

What is your fucking problem??? You're a fool.

He'll never be able to trust her or get the image out of his mind. She has to go. Don't be a pussy. MAN UP!

She is a good woman and he is treating her like crap. He deserves everything he's gonna get. How can one have this much of a macho problem?

Reconciliation is the only possible outcome. Does the story carry enough interest to overcome this transparency? No. You write pretty well, but you don't offer humor or wit or wisdom, just a progression toward the end, which is as in evitable as the tides.

Waiting for the next chapter...

For those of your readers who don't think a man can cry - they are either immature, lacking in parental love or all of the foregoing. Crying is a natural release for a deep and caring individual who has suffered a loss, it is cleansing and emotionally stabilizing...!!!

He knows he'll never stop loving her and he is going through, for honest reasons, what he feels his emotions need him to do and I don't think - happily. What I do think is the phone call in three months is from her father. My guess, Irv got to Jean and when she wouldn't cooperate, he beat her, abused her and raped her and she is now highly sedated in the hospital. Despite the fact that he is probably dating his new GF from Alaska I guarantee you he is on the next flight. He'll stay at her side for two or three days holding her hand and laying his head on her bed to sleep. I thinks she wake up temporarily and see him before she dozes off but just enough to make her feel hopeful and warm and happy that he is there.

You folks figure it out...this is my guess, a disaster to bring him back and realize that while she was not thinking clearly and foolishly allowed something to get out of hand where she had no control, Dalton realizes this and he knows in his heart that no woman ever could replace his feelings for her and no man ever would replace him in her love so...

For what its' worth, I had to walk away from a similar tragedy many years ago and it damn near killed me. The difference, she got into coke and had a good time at a party with so called friends and colleagues. It wasn't my pride, it was the fact that I could not spend 50 years getting worried or distrusting her every time we had fun at a party. She tried for months to get me to reconsider but I knew, she made sober decisions, maybe for just a one time, but I could never trust her again. I still miss her, love her for the good memories and greatly hurt for the facts and missing what we had!

It took me two years before I could enjoy a date and even longer for intimacy, I'm a lover - not a flat out fucker. So, minor difference here for Dalton.

I think he'll go for the one chance and I think he'll get with Jack to make sure Irv gets 20 plus and roomed with Bubba who will be told that Irv caused all394C, was the bad guy and turn him into the Queen that he should be. Epilogue in 20 years, Irv is seen at a Gay bar trying to get laid.

Okay, my two cents and I'm sticking to it.

BTW, very good writing and obviously from an author who has had good upbringing, worldly awareness and a student of human nature.

Thanks!

I am waiting for the next part so far its a well written good story that hold my attention. I am only hoping that in the next part that she doesn't show up preg. if she did that would make this all to unreal. He would have to wander if it was his and if he believed her when she said that so far only kissing and no penetration has happened this if you don't count being fingered which I find would be hard to believe. Even if it was true it was just a matter of time they had gone this far once the blowjob was done what is there to hold back on the rest not the cheating they have gone way to far for that to be a problem. I don't believe that you can truly love someone 100% and cheat on your spouse there would have to be some problems some where. Good story keep writing making you a favorite Author for now.

Thanks for sharing.

KEEP YOUR FUCKING MOUTH SHUT. CAN WE ENJOY THE STORY WITHOUT YOU SPOILING IT.

THATS WHY WE READ YOU IDIOT.

Great story by the way.

Here's a point people seem to miss - BDSM is a sexual fetish and even when there is no penetration it is possible to get a great deal of pleasure and even orgasm from the control and submission. Needless to say, that is a very intimate relationship and when one has committed to marriage, it is a violation of vows. In fact, it's intimate enough that she was even embarrassed to bring it up to her husband. There's a lack of trust there as well, but it's basically about intimacy that IS cheating.

Not particularly a fan of "using the cops as a weapon" stories, simply because there's the refusal to acknowledge that the husband is blowing thousands, if not more, of taxpayer dollars and valuable police time just to humiliate his cheating whore wife. There are better, less expensive ways to do that, ways that don't involve stabbing one's fellow citizens in the back.

Still, good story. Enjoying the second read. A reminder to others - please don't be dicks with the spoilers. Some of us have indeed read it elsewhere, but not everyone goes to those other sites.

personaly i think the husband is a bit over the top and is draging the humilition f

to far .i wont be reading any more

I like your story, keep it up, just don't blow it now.

I wouldn't be surprised if Jean is pregnant. I don't remember reading how often Jean and Dalton had sex or the last time they did but that is all that seems to be missing from this story now to bring them back together. He has too much sympathy for Jean so I don't understand why he is acting like he isn't going to forgive her.

love you work, lets hear from you more often. I read the complete story at sol. thanks for writing.