by gtanya
very promising start, looking forward to part 2.2
Awaiting you next and next. Please continue...
I definitely want to keep reading and see where this goes!
Please continue this story it is sooo hot :)
This is by far my favourite work of yours and i desperately need the next chapter! I've waited a year.
Very well articulated and a great setup. One suggestion would be to have it as a dialogue in real-time rather than a narration.