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Click here"I have a couple things I need to do right now. Maybe later." He replied, knowing he needed to go somewhere and see if he could have a talk with that other voice.
He turned to head out into the living room, but Brenda caught his arm.
"We'll talk about us later?" she said, more a statement and less a question.
"Of course" he said with a smile and kissed her softly.
He shut the bedroom door behind him as he heard the three of them begin kissing and fooling around. He headed down the hallway towards the living room, but stopped short at the end of the hallway.
Standing right beside the tree, holding the box of tarot cards, was a man. There but not really there: a mental projection of sorts.
"Good morning," the man said in the same voice that had been inside his head the night before. "Ready to figure out how to use these?"
- COMMENTS
AbstractRealityabout 8 years agoAuthorDon't worry, anon. Chapter 3 is done and ready to be uploaded. It took me 2 weeks to get Literotica to upload the corrected version of chapter 2. I'll be submitting 3 this weekend after I do some final checks for spelling, grammar, and continuity.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoYou are now officially keeping us in suspense! I'm anxious to see what the other cards do!
Professor_XXXover 8 years agoThere something super-hot about none of the people being in control in this scenario. I hope that you don't get too wrapped up in the wedding-dress "mystery" if it doesn't go anywhere.
Also, think about adding a physical detail or two,about each of the characters to flesh them out a little. I can't picture Brenda vs Jennifer, although I remembered Jenn not wanted to get come in from the previous chapter.
AbstractRealityover 8 years agoAuthorCrap. I just realized I uploaded the wrong version of this chapter! I'm going to re-upload. I am SO embarassed.
