All Comments on 'It's Amazing What Can Happen'

Fellas if you want to argue about the quality of the story head to the forum not here. Thats why I have deleted the comments.

This was my first story and it was a true story although the sex was as bad as my writing, the couple we watched where old & fat and the original discription was deleted (and names changed)so the girl couldn't recognise herself. It wasn't meant to be good it was written for therapy reasons. I hope my future attempts are more to your satisfaction

if Leave a Public Comment is nto the place to discuss a story, perhaps you needs to have the no comments option.

Poor spelling with many grammatical errors. How can the author spell "manipulation" and misspell "lose"?