All Comments on 'It's Been 10 Years in the Making'

Happily married and cheating? Ooookay.

Sure she's dripping from arousal or did she pee herself since you never let her actually go to the bathroom? Speaking of dripping, that's a silly hyperbole. Many ways to describe it, but dripping?

It would be easier to read if most of your paragraphs were not waaay too long. The brain and eyes glaze over at such large blocks. Readers start to skip and skim, losing much of the story in the process. Keep writing, but make it easier to read.