All Comments on 'It's Danielle's Birthday!'

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PanesOfGlasssPanesOfGlasssover 9 years ago
Tender story

It's great when a story is more about love than just sex. Don't get me wrong though, the expression of sex was tender and beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Make version of lesbian relationship

So much narration. Boring, no character development. How to tell if your lesbian smut was written by men: tons of giggling, completely unrealistic sex.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Very erotic!

And well written! thank you so much for sharing this story with us!

BobbieKayeCutieBobbieKayeCutieabout 5 years ago
Very sweet story

I absolutely loved this! The slow, sweet, loving seduction, with two girls who care so much about each other, and one of them so nervous, so scared, yet so curious.

Absolutely a five star story! Thanks!

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