All Comments on 'Its Eyes Are for the Stars Ch. 04'

You are driving me crazy, how could you stop there! I want our sassy Aislyn back home where she belongs and our original mated pair back together this dragging it out is stressing me out! lol Next chapter soon please!!!

I was thinking that Zach deserves to have trouble claiming his mate as payback for his despicable actions. But what he did to Aislyn and the fallout for Santana can't be atoned for by anything he does or suffers through. Looking forward to the next chapter, hope Santana is in it.

Wow I almost feel bad for Zach, someone needs to smack him what he did was selfish.

D**m man, I must say you got this story on edge and you know what your doing, don't keep us waiting to long now

I'm so glad you kept it to the main characters just about. Still disappointed about Santana and Alex not being in this one though. I hope they get the majority of the next chapter

Overall I enjoyed this chapter, but its too PG. This is literotica, and the eroticness has been weak. I'm anxious for the next chaoter.

Please continue with this story. I can't wait to hear about Aislyn reuniting with her family and meeting Delta. Also hope Alex and Santana reconnect! Please don't make me wait too much longer for the next chapter!

on this story :( i been checking very day but still nothing :( just wanna know if this story will continue please let us all know soon

Well, what did he expect her to say? Especially when he interrupted her seducing her mate for the first time. He knew that what he was doing was wrong even before he met Simone. He took advantage of Aislyn and now he will have to face the consequences, on top of trying to figure out how to win his human mate.

This is too good to just leave it.

Waiting for the next chapter

I check your biography page and this story quarterly in the hopes of a new chapter or info on the story being either published or on another site. Please keep us posted.

It's been awhile since you've added to this series. This story/series is awesome. I love the characters and the story line has me on the edge. I was sad when I got to the last entry because there's still a lot of story left open. So with that being said, please, please, please continue the series. I'm excited to see what's next for all characters.

This is a wonderful dreadful story. Could you please finish it?

I'm waiting patiently, for the next installment. Please don't leave us in suspence...

Getting older just waiting for the next chapter I love this story its sad you haven't undated in a while....

I just finished, for the second time. Love the story, wish I had more to read. Can't imagine all these characters are absent from your mind. There has to be at least one that is letting you know they're ready... But, I'll wait with everyone else. Hmmm!!!

I absolutely abhor you for writing something this good....and then disappearing into thin air.

Please finish writing something about santana n Alex....Im dying to see how this ends!!

Fuck! How dare you write a beautiful story and not finish it!!! Make me fall in love with these characters and RIP them from my heart all in the same day! I detest you, you're a disgrace to all of the writing world, but please come back! I need closure!

I read through the entire series in one sitting. I really like the concept and the story line. Looking forward to reading more.