All Comments on 'It's Fabulous'

Sucked .

English as a 3rd language :(

What does a bar use this jute box for?

Collapsible Jute Box w Clear Lid easily folds into box with a few full strings. Box case is made fully from sturdy Jute material.

a great premise but difficult to follow; they had breakfast twice. Before you post your next story, because there should be, find an editor to help with your spelling and continuity.

What a dumb line, since she was a virgin and had only been fucked once.

BTW, what is this guy's name? Puzz or Puss? WTF kind of a name is Puzz??

Do all your stories end(?) with 'to be continued'

There is so much awfulness here. Her tube? Telling him to fuck her like she's never been fucked before when they both know she had sex for the first time that day? He saves her from being raped only for her to not give a second thought to raping him? On top of that and everything else the other comments mention, none of the dialogue sounds realistic or natural.