by lickitthenstickit27
haha! thanks! i didn't have anyone to do it for me /: when i type i think its perfect but i just read it over.
Even if there are no typos, it often helps to have a second set of eyes review and offer advice on stories. If you don't like the advice you can ignore it, but I think it makes for better stories.
Sorry, couldn't read it. I'm sure there's a decent story in there somewhere, but you REALLY need to work with an editor before submitting anything else.
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Nothing there - no real details or facts, just a few verbs.