All Comments on 'It's Just Sex... Ch. 01'

Great story! I loved the closeness and intimacy between them, and the pee play was an unexpected bonus! I like too that they didn’t go to full on mouth pissing the first time, but rather a simple pants pissing to break the dam, so to speak.

I was disappointed that it ended so abruptly, but I’m hoping you’ll write a second chapter soon. You also made a point of describing them as having simple flip phones, but then he’s watching a piss video on his phone, which didn’t make sense.

But the story was well written and very erotic. 5*s

I thought UALBbanygirl's comments were excellent. I am not big on peeking, but it was only external.

5 stars. i really like the 2 main characters- Max and Michael. very tender relationship. I usually don't like water sports - but in this chapter it worked great. Can hardly wait to read chapter 2

I tried to read this story, but the content pissed me off. It may get better in the next chapter, but I won't bother reading it, to find out. One star.

Fantastic story. Looking forward to Part 2

Great first chapter, 5/5