All Comments on 'It's Just Sex... Ch. 04 - Finale'

No pissing.

A story full of love and devotion.

i liked the sex near the end, the pissing was subtle. i gave it 5 stars. i would have liked a little more sex but...... i saw this is your first series on this site - its well written and a good tale. i hope you keep writing. you could even use max and mike and write a sequel that occurs a few years later - did they have kids, adopt, maybe find a 3rd person as a "cover". all sorts of paths you could follow. but please keep writing.

... like having them move to New Jersey or Rhode Island, where consensual adult incest is not a crime. They still couldn't get married, legally, but they could live together, sleep together, and even have a child (with genetic counseling!) if they so desired, all without fear of being arrested.

Great story keeping it. 5/5

I agree with the other comments that there needs to be additional chapters. Well done 5 stars.