All Comments on 'It's My Life: Three'

Really liked the story and hope the rest is just as good

I'm enjoying your series very much and hope to see this continue. You have a style that's easy to read, and it's funny and erotic as well. Keep up the good work!

Great story line please continue. This story seems to be a catharsis for you. Its not often one gets to see the demise of a marriage from the point of view of the woman. It seems your Ex didn't really know what a comnmitment was. You didn't know you were agreeing to be shared when you said love, honor and obey.

Your story sounds like you should trade Mike for Bernie. Daphne would get a big cock and you'd get a older guy who knows how to suck and fuck a girl.

As a story this is excellent; it captures the narrator's emotion, has a nice flow to it, and makes sense.

As erotica I'm less satisfied. Quite frankly, this level of realism evokes feelings of guilt for having lustful fantasies. When the narrator is bored and annoyed with the circumstances she's in, the reader can have the same response.

Regardless, this is certainly an interesting read, and well written.

You are absolutely wild. Out of your mind! I love it!!! The dialog is priceless. As are your thoughts. The technical aspects of the story -- grammar, punctuation, spelling, paragraphing -- are flawless. Characters are that, just a bunch of characters. Even though you spent almost no time developing them, I feel as if I've known them forever. I guess that is because I've know people just like them. <g>

Looking forward to future chapters and to other stories. I hope you continue to share your talents with us for a long time.

Your humor was wonderful and your writing is excellent. it was about sex, but not erotic. It was sad, but funny. I will look for more from you!

Great writing, of course. What I find particularly intriguing is the juxtaposition of her reluctant consent to his clueless enthusiasm. You do an absolutely terrific job of painting just that picture.

but while everyone will watch a trainwreck most aren't aroused by it.

Next.