All Comments on 'It's My Turn: Round Two'

by kellycummings

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
You've outdone yourself!!

What a great story. I am waiting with baited breath for part 3. Lets see her force him to suck off a number of them. A circle suck. Or maybe gloryholes?

woodcarverIIwoodcarverIIover 20 years ago
I dont care what anyone says.

This is a great theme and so well written. No matter who says contrary. Please continue these characters!

A7inchPhildoA7inchPhildoabout 20 years ago
Impressed

I am really impressed with the quality of your stories. Though this story lacks a bit of personal character emotion it is strong and percise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
So Bad

This story is so bad, "Shut the fuck up bitch!" What a lame line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
shit ain't worth reading

white trash bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Mean Fuck

Again it is well written and a nice addition to the first part. I bit to much hitting... he did show a little bit of backbone but she cowred him to easily. I would have retaliated and it probably would have ended it. Then again it is only a story :-) BTW-what is with your hecklers?? They need to get a life.

sweet_lusciousdesiresweet_lusciousdesirealmost 11 years ago

Bruce began to moan and had to take his tongue off my pussy, I don’t think he could concentrate on it anymore

Try a period instead of a comma and get yourself an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Payback will be a bitch...

After that girlfriend would be used relentlessly as a slut... Gang banged by anyone I wanted... And I'd be out fucking anyone I wanted.... Actually I'd have walked out the minute she demanded sucking the guys dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No love... Took it too far.

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