All Comments on 'It's not Cheating if You Don't Touch'

I don't really get the logic of having penetration and a creampie in the first chapter of a series about not touching.

But the characters held out until temptation overwhelmed them.

Totally believable, recently written. Looking for the next episode.

It's goofy alright. Generally you'd expect to experience the sexual tension of not touching to avoid cheating, and altought it still does a good job at it, the touching came too quickly. He should've just covered her ass in cum without announcig to the reader beforehand. Not to mention that it is kinda of annoying to announce he broke up with his girl months later when he intends to keep writing the story.

Great story, loved it. Looking forward to parts 2 and 3!!!

Great story, thanks for sharing!

I love how you build the tension, both characters knowing it's wrong but just too... tempting to not take it a little further step by step. Can't wait to read the second volume!!

Absolutely loved this story and found it so damn hot. Really excited for the second part. Hope it gets posted soon!

I loved your story. No nasty sex, but very, very exciting!

I enjoyed the build of tension , it took me back to my flatting days, l also had a flatmate who masturbated with a dildo which l found whilst snooping, but unlike you l did lick her juice off it while l masturbated. You can read about my adventure in my submission.

the advertisement at the end killed the mood

So where is 2 and 3? Its been about 7 years since this was posted so I won't be holding my breath. Too bad it seemed like a fun story. Thank you.