All Comments on 'It's Not the Size That Counts Ch. 11'

by ElyssaCousland

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kdlucaskdlucasalmost 8 years ago
Yea!!

I could fall in love with Steven too! I don't mind the short chapters as long as they keep coming (no pun intended). Thank you. I know that writing is not easy and the authors here receive nothing for their work. It's love of their craft. I appreciate your work. Thank you again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Man of our dreams

The ultimate fantasy, well told: an experienced sexual surrogate for a lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very enjoyable

I read all chapters currently published this morning and enjoyed it greatly. Their bantering, the fact they both have issues, and the natural flow of the storyline were outstanding. I'm looking forward to the continuance. Hugs, Julie

worshipper622worshipper622almost 8 years ago
Spectacular!

Whatever complaints or negatives have been voiced, erase them all! You methodically formed your thoughts, presented them in a well-written manner, and then resisted reader rants to change the pace.

Well done. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
it's a...

beautiful story and I just so love a happy ending - thanks for your time and talent!

oh...and Happy New Year btw...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
His background story was a bit much.

First the BDSM and then the sex therapy thing. I like some thread of reality in the story but him having both was just too much. A story with just the sex therapy background would have been perfectly adequate. 4*

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