All Comments on 'It's Only a Little Prick'

by AverageBear

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Your tongue's planted firmly in your cheek....

Though I would have preferred that you instead planted it between Shannon's slippery labia, I have to give you credit for creativity and good humour.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story but wrong category

Should have been in humor/satire. I loved it but many non-consent/reluctance readers would have felt cheated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Unexpected

Lol... hilarious actually.... gotta admit... u got me!!! Lmao

PrettyGPrettyGalmost 13 years ago
HA!!!

That was a good one. I never knew getting a shot was soooo hot!!!

blackduchessblackduchessover 12 years ago
Hilarious!

And here I thought it was rape... Good one!

SlaveGirlRedApplesSlaveGirlRedApplesabout 12 years ago

Oh you really got me going, Oh please tell me u have more like this. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Well, way to go all O. Henry on us.

Seriously. Dude. What.

markranemarkraneabout 9 years ago
Yeah, that was an O. Henry for sure!

cool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

That was a fun way to twist the story into something unexpected.

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I enjoy writing tales with memorable characters and a deeper meaning, so if you're just looking for a stroke story, you might look elsewhere. That said, you'll find some pretty hot sex in most of my stories. Reader emails and other forms of feedback are welcome! Best regards,...