All Comments on 'It's Strictly Business'

Great story and quite good italian!!! Bravo!!!

5 stars from here! ;)

If this had been posted in Humor & Satire (which I never read), maybe I would give it a 3.

Wife is stupid (and a slut) to think vaginal entry (and anal) by any man apart from her husband is okay. I won't give this a score.

It's a great story. It had a beginning a middle and a romantic end. 5stars

It is hard to overlook she was doing live sex shows with another man. At least, now she does them with her husband.

Preposterous! By design. Great stories must be well told and to some extent unique, this is both. Well done. 5.

Cute

The ending was what I thought it might be. 5*

I don't get what his problem was to start with. It was just a job

The video clearly showed a clinical demonstration without any emotion. Husband was a bit too harsh as only issue was humiliation if there were people they knew. Wife was too apologetic. Anyhow, story turned out OK for everyone. It seems however that wife with her attributes could easily have found another line of work.

5 Big Blazing Stars! What can happen when the wife gets fucked Demonstrating her Lingerie and Vibrators and brings a 'Chip N Dale' dancer to put his cock in her to help demonstrate how they work. LOL, Hubby feels like a horse kicked in the nuts with her BETRAYAL. How can a hubby EVER even think of forgiveness? She didn't fuck this guy every demonstration because she was drunk, she did it on purpose, With a clear head. The only thing that should be done is a .44 mag to the brain of both of the cheaters. There is no fixing this. She is Slut, Whore, Cheater in her heart. LOL Buster2U

It did have the feel of an HDK story. Although with locations like the Dew Drop and the Bent Spoon that gave it a bit of a JPB feel.

I really liked it...

A good hearted pleasant story well done

Loved it Thank you 5 stars

A novel idea, well executed. D

Nicely done. Thank you

Now I will have to binge on your stories. You are doing very well for yourself on Literotica. Keep posting these little gems, but drop in an occasional fag cuck wimp story just to give the commenters some raw meat that they can use to try to damage your self esteem. Nice story, thanks for the mention and for reading my stuff.

Decent story until the convoluted career choice at the end. Never start a family in that scenario. 4.1*

Definitely not your run of the mill LW story. Thoroughly enjoyed it! 5* for the creativity and originality.

Original - yes, and I liked it a lot!

Different and well done. Not so sure about the business, even as a married couple in some locales they could end up arrested & having their kids taken away, especially these days....but still, is a clever take on a cheating but not cheating scenario.

The wife was getting fucked at every demonstration. That is a whore. She got paid commisions for sales. It is still a whore. If she wants to be a whore, she could just move to one of those "whore houses' in Nevada. No forgiveness. Great writing tho, Great Story, Great Idea, Great Effort. Great way to tie a guys guts in a knot! Similar to George Andersen's 'February Sucks' in heart break. LOL. I still would throw her cheating ass in the gutter. Maybe that is why I been married so many times! Thanks, Buster2U 5 stars

Not sure but what this belonged in "Exhibitionism" as it seemed they both had that trait. And I'm sure I don't want a bunch of strangers watching my wife and I having sex - for ANY reason.

How to make an honest buck the Italian way. A good story and a good Momma in law.

Still a slut and he is just as bad

Enjoyable except for the anal sex. Couldn't figure out what you thought that added to the story. Your Italian is not bad!

Sorry, going to go a little clinical…. If you had ended it with them starting to go to a nude beach to scratch the exhibitionist itch or something like that, sure… the I quit my job thing just seemed like you had a good story and couldn’t figure out a good way to get off the stage… up to the five years later part it was great.

THAt was a really unexpected and totally delightful twist.

Hard to reconcile her admission that she'd divorce him over the same thing she had already done.

I can see why he'd feel better that the sex was planned and mostly mechanical. But it could be argued that made it planned and more calculated an affair. That or she doesn't value fidelity.

I also take issue with his idea that a revenge affair would ruin everything. He's already standing on the ruins. Even if he showed grace, and he did, chances are his toxic feelings she gave him would fester. It's easy to write a superhero that forgives, harder in real life. It's a daily struggle. No one let's go because people can't let go. Memories don't give that choice. You're stuck with feelings and have to forgive daily for the same past crime. That's the reality. And while revenge is cruel, it eases that burden. There is no healthy was forward is the point. Its all messy.

Tags please!

I don't understand why the husband was going through counseling. He didn't have a problem, unlike her.

You really did channel HDK here. Good work!

ic69hunter must think being married to a street walking, crackhead, disease infested whore would be OK, it's just a job right?

This husband is a figment of the authors imagination as no man would endure this kind of emotional and physical disrespect, degradation and outright show of carelessness.

She used to come home after her parties and jump her husband. Then that stopped. Why? That should have been addressed.

The problem of reconciling with a woman who cheats in this kinda of "matter of fact" fashion is the inevitably lose respect for you. They know if the situation were reversed then they would divorce you (as she says in this story) so when you take them back and don't divorce them they think either you're weak with no backbone, or that you're a willing cuck. Either way they get to do it again with no repercussions other than a little arguing. That's a untenable position to be in so unfortunately, you have to dump them even if you love them, you have to make them pay a price, even if you still love her, so she can respect you.

Not sure something like that would fly in the real world, nor I am not sure I would let my wife do something like that. Lastly, married women are safer, how delusional are you!

I felt the bit of the HDK influence when, upon talking to his wife, Harold's actually apologizing, even silently, that his actions led to that point. While happy they eventually reconciled, he shouldn't have felt guilty for anything he did. Many men would've divorced their wives over her "business". Telling him that demonstrating some sexual positions with the sex items was for them & their family, it's a weak argument at best. She did it at all her parties and, admittingly, enjoyed it- even if they only went so far.

Harold's right in letting her go to her mother; in fact, HE should've been the one to tell her. Back to the reconciliation, I suppose I'm happy it happened only because of her intent & not the desire to cheat, as purely stupid as that thought was. Added to the fact that she didn't speak to him, letting him know what she's doing & why. Yeah, she apologized, but after the fact. She mentioned the bachlorette party: he should ask what really went on there, as that's the base for getting this model.

The last, & I'm not sure I want to understand this, he not only allowed her to return to the "parties", albeit with him as the model, he quit his at least decently paying job to branch out with their own business. Now it's getting men into it; what happens next, couples seeing the sex items then actually using it as a preview to swinging parties?

A decent, different story, but too much- from his feeling guilty to going back to the sex item parties - to give this anything more than a 3. Actually, it's the latter that demanded this rating. Also, tho not overwhelming, still that influence of HDK where men're often viewed as at least somewhat weak, & women wind up smelling like roses. Bob

This was very good till the ending. 3/5

So for 3 months, 12 weeks, he said every week she gave him the best sex after her parties so she had sex with this guy roughly 36 times or maybe more in front of any number of people who may or may not did like Jessica did and record it and in the end he's ok with it. She is just a cheating slut and he should have kicked her ass to the curb.

"we had sexual contact at parties, but no big deal..." And he bought that shit. What a moron.

You didn’t need to include the last page.

two stupid people that deserve each other.

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I love the Dottie character!!! 5* alone for that one. You nailed it!!!!

The writing style was awesome and the story had really good flow to it. However, the content warrants 2 stars. (Especially if Buster2u loved it.)

The piece I can’t get past is the loss of trust. Monica knew her husband would never approve and still went out and found another man to have sex with. Regardless of presentation mode, acting clinical, and her model not ejaculating in her, she still spread and allowed him into her. It demonstrates a deceitfulness, lack of judgment, and disrespect for her husband. You can’t fix stupid so you divorce her. She’s got a track record that can’t be fixed.

The ending was just an excuse for RAAC and hubby coming to grips with being a cuckold.

From too easy reconciliation over whoring to making a living by having public sex. And they lived happily ever after? Sorry, this requires too much suspension of disbelief for me. Still, four stars for genuine emotions.

Normally I hate a reconciliation story without a payback. 5 stars. You win and keep writing!

I liked it, but I don't buy it. She must have practised with her model outside of the parties, but that was never discussed or addressed. That most likely led to a much less clinical approach to sex with that guy. She was a cheat and not just a whore.

You're gonna get a lot of criticism about 'did she cheat before he found out?' and you can't trust her. The Bear likes a happy ending. The old saying 'Walk a mile in my shoes' comes to mind. It's not always a slam dunk to forgive and move on. That is for him to know, and the rest of us to criticize. I think he made the right decision. (Sue me, I'm an old softie.) 5 stars, the Bear approves. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

P.S. Mrs. Bear says she was an idiot, But she thinks they love each other.

P.P.S (?) A different ending would have to be to find the next party, show up and tell the "Stud" to Pissoff, and then bust her ass. He could have her served or just embarrassed. Either way... Just saying.

The BEAR

Love a happy ending. Was it the right ending, I think so. The description of the sex was so clinical it sounded like it would put a damper on the sales, not boost them. The only time it was described as there being any sign of her gaining any pleasure was the bullet demo. 5-stars.

Not so good but high five for trying. I wish you success in the future.

Sometimes people do stupid things when they think their situation is desperate without weighing the consequences!

5

Well... this WAS different, and I thought it was pretty clever at the ending.

I could never be that sanguine with my wife having done what this one did, nor could I ever be free enough to become the model in their new company... but it was a fun read (5 stars), and probably a lot of guys' fantasy.

That's where it ends for me - someone ELSE's fantasy !

Molto bene! 5 stars for an amusing and fresh take on LW.

"I just kept telling myself that it was all for us. Justifying it to myself that it was so we could start a family..."

Yes, of course! Awesome! I suppose in the near future it would be expected that after several months of unsuccessful attempts to get pregnant from her husband, all with the same ease, simplicity and all with the same arguments about the welfare of their family - she would go to fuck with the same "other Charles", but now with the aim of having a baby as soon as possible - it doesn't matter from whom. After all, it will strengthen their family, right? And the number of attempts and a lot of people involved only bring closer and increase the chances of success, don't they?

HDK seems to be hung up on "fag cuck wimp story" in his old age. Actually that seems to be all he posts anymore when Randi let's him.

I find it very hard to believe Charles's restraint, professionalism and understanding. Maybe he's a shitty and worthless stripper? It is clear that she paid him some money. But how, initially, she was able to persuade, stimulate and persuade him to cooperate - the only one who agreed from the whole gang of strippers is a very big question... And imagine - this guy, time after time, left her presentations excited and unsatisfied, with blue balls... Why does he need such discomfort and, in some way, humiliation? No, it seems to me that she didn't tell her husband everything about her relationship with Charles. She confirmed, explained and rationalized only what her husband had seen and what she could not deny or conceal. The behind-the-scenes part of the relationship between "colleagues" has remained a mystery, shrouded in darkness.

Maggie's behavior is completely inexplicable. At first, she does her best to expose Monica's "working infidelity" to Harold, but a little later, in fact, somewhat allegorically, takes her side and is already trying to arrange their reconciliation...

First - presentations only for married women, then - attracting their husbands too... What worries me is this - won't it turn out that in about six months - all this risks turning into full-fledged swinger parties?

"Please Harold, I can't live like this, not being with you... not knowing... I don't know what to do... how to fix it... maybe you should go fuck someone else, get even with me, just..."

To be honest, I expected that after that, with the words: "Sì, sì, figliolo-mia figlia dice le parole giuste!" - Dottie, who was eavesdropping on their conversation outside the door, will enter the room undressing...

Good story. I like Dottie. Sounds like a great business. Maybe they should branch out or franchise the business.

The dumbest people in the world compete hard to make the stupidest comment concerning what the characters in a FICTIONAL story REALLY did, thought, or felt. Hey, I've got an idea! Write one YOURSELF! (But then, on the other hand, we've read crap like that! So, forget my suggestion!)

It was a great plot idea, not original, but still somewhat rare. It was sad to see the story executed with such clumsy and lame plot devices. Miscommunication and/or lack of communication is a lazy plot device. When you can't achieve drama and suspense with action and words, you resort to using a calendar; how many days of Silent Treatment? The stupid cucks dithering and circular contemplation just made him look like a mental light weight. Maybe the wife was looking for someone with more brains?

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And while there was a lot of filler and pointless details (Like we needed to know they made espresso, and the machine was a Christmas gift; WTF?), you missed or mischaracterized some of the most obvious questions: Why was the wife coming home all hot for sex when just displaying the fuck toys alone, but when she started getting partially fucked with the toys she came home quiet and despondent? Wouldn't she want her husband to finish what her fuck buddy started, then left? Remember, she supposedly wasn't getting real complete pleasure from the male model, so why wasn't she ready to complete what the sex model started? And when where and how did the wife teach the sex model how to use the toys before she started bringing him to the parties? The husband never thought to explore those questions. But the biggest question is, why didn't the wife at least get her husband to try the sex toys on her? She obviously enjoyed the toy that went up her ass, among others, but she never took the opportunity to experiment and play with the toys with her husband? Strip dancer yes, husband no. But she's So Sorry. Too many unknowns, but he can't think of any of them while he supposedly trying to think things through. Fail.

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Of course putting on sex shows disguised as training demonstrations is probably a crime. They have zero academic or professional sex education credentials, they're just charging people to watch them fuck. Is that a problem? Tell it to the judge.

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Really, a great idea, but it missed the mark by a wide margin. Better luck with future work.

I’ve read many stories much worse in LW.

Not really great, but a 5 none-the-less.

This was a good attempt and had an interesting angle.

The detail about not wearing a condom with the buff stripper won't quit nagging and there were a couple of other loose strings that would have taken longer to write with more depth.

I gave it 4* though because it was creative and pretty well written.

It was a good loving story even with the separation. Not as sex filled as I would have liked but a good story. Page 3 brought up memories of MONTEY PYTHON'S THE MEANING OF LIFE as the couple were giving "classes" on sex and foreplay

I agree with ANON, below, who states that writers on this site use the same tired, idiotic plot devices and filler because they cannot write a realistic, complex scene, much less several scenes tied together into a... story! Too many powerful little egos drive the creators to publish stories that essentially scream for attention, much like graffiti artists and people who write on bathroom walls do. Edit, you fools. Edit.

They should team up with a local ABS. If they could get the wives more interested maybe they would go in with their husbands to find the perfect prop to improve their sex life and strengthen their married life.

Happy for author that he received such praise from names I respect. But I'm surprised so many people liked it. She was cheating in a big way. Light hearted fun.

To: Anonymous, who made the following comment: "The dumbest people in the world compete hard to make the stupidest comment concerning what the characters in a FICTIONAL story REALLY did, thought, or felt."

Listen to me, my friend... Never, I emphasize - NEVER! Don't you dare tell people what they should do and what they shouldn't do. Is it possible to comment on fictional situations - or is it impossible? If you want to jerk off, jerk off on the sly.. (I recommend going to other categories, but not to LW.) Here are gathered, exclusively, smart people who want to discuss the behavior of the characters, the originality of the interweaving of storylines and other advantages of the narrative... Forgive me for my lame English... If you have any complaints or questions about my audacity.. I will only say: I am Russian! And that explains a lot...

Well here’s something new! Nice twist. I wouldn’t have put as much stock in the lack of emotion angle had I been in Harold’s shoes. But I wasn’t in his shoes, I was just reading about it! People are all different, and react different to things that happen in life. They value things differently. I’ve known plenty of people in open relationships who love the one they’re with (to quote a great song). I’ve known others who have gone to war due to infidelity, and others who tough it out for the children. In this story, Harold found his way back to his true love after she strayed. Only he can say it was a stupid move, because only he can measure the amount of love that guided him. Great story, well written, thanks!

Femdom agitprop with a difference, and I love it when the couple really do love each other.

The ending twist was creative. But so.ehow it gets glossed over that she had vaginal penetration with male exotic dancer, a couple times a day 5 days a week for 12 weeks (i.e. 3 months). Yes he saw one video where it looked "clinical". The lie was big. She rationalized it wad ok. She would have kept doing it. Of course she enjoyed the contact. And how is he to trust that she never had an actual affair with the guy? Deus ex machina therapy. Somehow it all worked. Just question the road to get there. Seems implausible. But hey it is fiction.

Interesting plot butnthere is equality in thearriage she cheats several times a week forn3 mo ths and. They reconciled....huh not Don but I cant see reconcile with therapy amd the ending. Meeeeh good effort poor execution

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Sexcellente!

I am reminded of the film 'Monty Python's The Meaning of Life'...particularly 'Part Three: Growth and Learning' when John Cleese is instructing male students about sex and then has sex with Patricia (Magenta - 'The Rocky Horror Picture Show') Quinn playing his wife.

11/10!!!!!

She's still a whore, and who wants to stay married to a whore? Dispassionate or not, lustful or not, cheating is still cheating. Then they were both sex workers... Even more horrible. Hated it, sorry.

Bella Donna, by any other name, is STILL a deadly shade of night!

She STILL welcomed her Greek God Charles' dong into her married ding, and admitted she found it sexy and arousing. NOT once, but several times, at each and EVERY party- perhaps FIVE nights a week, perhaps MORE times every week than her husband?

But STILL he happily plunges his hapless little helmet into her festering fanny! Just wait 'til she realises that he's given her a gold-plated carte-blanche (hall pass, to our American Cousins) to have a repeat outing, with every Tool, Dick & Percy that tickles her taste buds!

Just what every `maid-without-mercy' needs, -"a Plonker-with-NO-pride"!

Congratulations! A Marriage-made-in-Hades! Maximum life expectancy? -666-days, tops!

Self-denial can make ugly things look pretty. "Love" can be a bitch. It can mean different things to each partner and, invariably, one is always disappointed.

I may be sappy, but I prefer happy endings.

I'm definitely not one of those that are 100% against reconciliation if there was cheating (people do it irl all the time), but I understand why these types of RAACs are hard for most to digest. It's much easier when the cheating is more plausible, as far as what someone would be willing to forgive. This is different for everyone, but there seem to be certain criteria for most in general. The martian slut ray types (as some would call it), or these types of infidelities of which you have written, are so egregious, that no matter how well you write the offender as apologetic and truly feeling the guilt and gravity, it just doesn't click for most people. She says there was no affair, but she was sexually penetrated (without a condom) a vast number of times. It doesn't really matter if there was emotion invloved, or if it was just to sell toys...it was an affair. I know you addressed why she didn't just ask her husband, but it all falls flat. It was a good attempt to make her come off as feeling truly awful about what she did, but I was still not able to look past her egregious betrayal of her husband. That, coupled with the fact that she had made it no big deal in her mind and that she was doing for them both, makes it impossible for me to think she could have any kind of decency in her. That said, I give it a 4/5 because it wasn't badly written, you mentioned what kind of story this would be from the jump, and the story did was it was supposed to do as far as stirring up emotions and thoughts.

The comment, "I'm definitely not one of those that are 100% against reconciliation..." nailed it perfectly.

I'll only add that it's very good writing. I just didn't buy the plot-line.

A good read that illustrate4s where foolishness leads.

Very unsatisfying story. She did not deserve to be taken back.

Yeah umm ... no. Reasonably well written but 5 days a week, two "shows" a day, for three months (i.e. 12 weeks), thatbis well over 100 penetrations. She stroked the guy, was vaginally penetrated in several positions and anally penetrated with a toy. And the "hot" male model was a Chippendale performer. Her logic as to why was borderline neurotic. She saw it as a clinical exercise. And as it stands just because of what he saw in the video, he has no way to know what the two of then did between shows or afterwards. While she seems to be remorseful and telling the truth about the extent of the many, many penetrations, there is no evidence beyond her word that she didn't screw Charles at other times, even once for "practice". Her reasons may have been (in her mind) to earn and save for babies but truthfully how can he know. Seems like for.mostnguys this is a RAAC too far. Author unfortunately made the betrayal too extensive and the frequency and circumstances too high and too far fetched. No kids. So probably best he just move on.

Ever heard of story tags???

Oh HELL NO! That's an immediate divorce.

I gave you five stars, because the writing was very good and the premise of the story was good. One thing that never got explained is exactly what it was that this guy got out of it, and if he was wearing protection. I just don’t buy that she could be so clinical and him being a man that knows how to arouse women and himself on stage let alone actually penetrating a woman, that nothing else ever happened.

2nd read, and this time 5 stars and a follow for your other work.

I'll consider this an RAAC for them figuring out a way to come to terms with her exhibitionist streak.

Not sure I could have forgotten her moving into using someone else to demonstrate the 'toys', but it seemed to work for them when he became the other party to the demonstrations...

...but who am I to judge.

There's just no way a reasonable man could see past that kind of betrayal, despite what the wife says. Only a complete moron of a woman could do that and somehow justify it to herself. RAAC was not believable; the betrayal was just too big. So many "demonstrations" over such a long time. I just don't see it happening.

Sorry, that pussy isn't yours anymore. It's a rented pussy, and rented pussy is now divorced pussy.

Thank you for the story. It was entertaining because I managed to ignore the obvious faults. One of the problems I have is that her whoring is actually a bigger deal than her cheating, and you didn't lean into that. It's one thing that kinda distinguishes this story from slew of other similar stories. A missed opportunity there, as it would have been a much more interesting story if the whole psychological thing about them dealing with it and trying it out themselves at the end was not just glossed over. Like the actual reconciliation process was glossed over. The actual reconciliation is the meat of these kind of stories and it you just wrote a couple of paragraphs and got done with it. This is why the story as a whole is unconvincing. Nobody cares how guilty and miserable the characters feel or about the ending if you can't write a convincing and moving transition between the two. Like I said, the reconciliation process should be the meat of the story. Not to mention, you also completely ignored how Dorothea would have reacted to both of them whoring out (because it'd obviously be an inconvenience).

Also, I wish there weren't so many haters commenting on these kind of stories. I certainly understand betrayal and anger, but not all imaginary unfaithful bitches need to be crucified for your pleasure. How about trying not to ruin it for those of us who like a good redemption story. Not that this is actually a good redemption story, unfortunately.

The wimp old out...Hand in your man card loser.

Original and creative. 5* for that. How likely? Who cares, it's a story. And a good one.

Story had an interesting situation as its premise. However, since Jessica had never met Monica, how did she recognize Monica as being Harold's wife? Maybe Jessica shared the raunchy video with her sister Maggie and Maggie recognized Monica. I realize it was merely a plot device for Harold to be told by Maggie.

From the title and story's beginning, I expected that Monica had started modeling lingerie at parties for men and from there becoming a stripper at bachelor parties. With those situations being ripe for her to be propositioned into "escorting".

Story was well written, though I disliked the ending with him quitting his job to work with his wife as married whores. What happens in another five years? Who will find them interesting as "demonstrators"?

In this story the RAAC was reasonable. Monica was not emotionally cheating. Unless a man believed his wife was a virgin on their wedding day, this clinical sex would be easier to accept than the knowledge she made passionate love to one or more lovers previous to her husband.

The ending with them in the "joint business venture" lowered the story's score from 4 to 3.

Well done and without a lot of long sex scenes and over the descriptions of the female genitalia. Very tastefully done. 4 stars

not sure how he got past that vid. guess theres some ppl that can unsee

A story about a cheat who made her husband a cuck. Terrible story about terrible people. Two stars.

I understand the video showed Monica and Charles having clinical, almost mechanical sex. That was necessary for Harold to consider forgiving Monica, but it was also a break from reality. The purpose of the sex demonstration was to convince the observing women to buy the products because the products enhanced the sexual experience. That requires a passionate orgasmic performance, even if it is acting. That requires a satisfied man and woman. The question becomes how many practice fuckings were required before the first "live" party demonstration. Monica is presented as a gorgeous total sexpot. Charles is the handsome total beefcake with an impressive package. It is difficult to believe their private rehearsals didn't become passionate and sweaty.

As many of the commenters, I couldn't identify with the main character. That doesn't make the story less good. It's just about other people.