All Comments on 'It's the Buzz that Matters!'

by JBancrofts99

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Equus7Equus7over 8 years ago
Great story

Keep up the stories! You are a good writer. Now I want to go to a sauna!

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
Interesting story

You take your readers through the sauna and give them the peek into it, but you don't elaborate a lot of what goes on enough (for me). The story goes and goes until finally he settles in with the 2 guys and gets to cum. It is a good story, but for me, it was not your best. I hope to read more of your works for you are a good writer.

ACLASSYLADY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

A lot of that sounds familiar from the few times I went to a place that used to be near here. They didn't have a completely dark room, and there were wet and dry saunas, but other than that it sounds very familiar. Instead of outright plastic, the upholstery was more like vinyl (not as shiny), and one of the video rooms was built in steps like an amphitheatre, and carpeted.

But I remamber a lot more action than happened in your story.

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