All Comments on 'It's The Way You Look At Me Ch. 11'

Fantastic again. Can't wait for the next chapter.

It's a great story and I like the way you have slowly built the relationship between Owen and Jamie. I can't wait for the next chapter and see what happens between Owen and his father as well as what is next installed for them.

why did they ask dad to watch the game with jamie as a way of working things out?

I really am enjoying your story and look forward to the additional chapters.

Y ou get better with evrey chapter of this. i hope you dont stop so soon with that story of yours.

Thank you

First cousin marriage is completely legal in both Florida and New York. The angst Owen and Jamie are feeling come from family and small town values. They seem to have over come all important obstacles. Where is the story going?

Very well written with feeling and class. Should be writing novels.

I absolutely love this story. I only have one question: shouldn't Owen & Jamie be pretending to be married when they introduce themselves to other couples? It seems to me that people like Ariel or Carrie & Steve would catch on that they have the same last name and they'd be curious. Owen is a pro football player so his name is publicly known and then people like Ariel & Carrie would know Jamie's full name for obvious reasons. Just something that was bugging me, otherwise I completely love the story.

Once again another well written chapter. I enjoy the depth you give the characters. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to the next installment.

I usually do look forward to your writings along with LC68, MC.. even tho ur story is very enjoyable to read , lately i find the lack of magnetism, as in that something pulls you in. Lately this story is becoming more like erotic coupling segment than the thrill of crossing forbidden lines . Where is the twist ? tho i will commend you on how you have able to capture the love n passion but somehow the thrill is gone.

Keep it going, love it!

I really like this story because of the way you describe real human feelings. I understood Dan's reaction when he learned about Owen and Jamie. And I understand the feelings of the three of them when they try to reconcile with each other.

As I have learned writing my own stories, it is nice to be able to accurately portray real human beings with all their complicated relationships, thoughts and feelings. So I am enjoying your story for its realistic way of dealing with such issues.

Here is what I see happening. Owen's dad is Jamie's real father making them half brother and sister.......

or

Jamie's mother tells Jamie that her real father is someone out of the family making them legal.

Awe 😢😢😢 ... When the dad apologized and they forgave him like that hit an emotional chord.

so, so very well worded....

I read n earlier comment in that its more like book and they ere right. a very, very good book that is hard to put down.

Just like a really good book I can't stop reading. You're a very talented writer.

I'm glad that they reconciled with Dad/Uncle Dan. I was hoping that it would eventually happen. 4/5