All Comments on 'It's Too Cliché...Right? Ch. 05'

am gonna come after you with a shotgun!

seriously though... can't u post it all at once? u are killing me here, don't know if I can wait till tomorrow and the next and the next...........

I'm absolutely adore your writing, and this story! The anticipation is really starting to build up. I wait until midnight here everyday to read the next installment of this amazing story. Are you only uploading here? Or do you have another medium that you upload to?

I flat out belly laughed over the onion scene...I'm still laughing for real. Especially considering the "stalk of lettuce." There's no such thing. So not only was Brad ignorant of what goes on in a kitchen, but so are you!

You are definitely my favorite author here. Kudos!

Before you come at me with that shotgun, please know that I'm completely innocent here. I can't publish it all at one shot even if I wanted to. It's all submitted and it's up to Lit to publish them. So, please don't hurt me. Lol

@Kotaputty: Glad you're enjoying this so far. At this point in time, yes this is my one source of publication. When I first started out with 'The New Kid' I had published on here and on Wattpad. I know right. Cringe. But I haven't posted anything there in a long time, so I guess this is my only outlet.

Excuse you, but I know my way around a kitchen fairly well, thank you very much. Haha. Seriously, though, I can say that since the story is written in Brad's POV then I can say that the stalk thing is his cluelessness, but I'm not going to. Yes, I know it's not called a stalk of lettuce, but you must also know that English has cultural differences around the world and where I live, there is nothing wrong with a lettuce stalk. Whatever the case, hey, at least you got a good laugh out of it. Lol

This is turning out to be one of the best series of Literotica. I really love it when authors pay attention to the plot and on character development.

So like where this is going . Hope that Evan does have feelings for brad and will all come together.Am just a sap for loving endings but also hope that we are far from the ending. So like your writing. Thanks John

Must .. stop .. reading .. But can't put it down.

Thanks Musicfreak love the story and your storytelling, you're one of the best if not, the best authors going round, awsome stuff.