All Comments on 'It's Who You Know Ch. 05'

I still love your story but the story lover in me wonders at why there is a mystery/thriller aspect. I mean is this a gay romantic thriller? I've read 100s of straight romantic thrillers. Successful ones tell a balanced story where both plotlines are well-fleshed out and logical. Right now the "THRILLER" part here makes ABSOLUTELY no sense. Scared, defenseless, confused RICH people hire bodyguards. Even crazier is a warehouse where drones are made that has no security and must rely on one co-worker to beat off bad guys. Romance here is still well-told, the thriller part no so much.

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Personally I love the "gay thriller" aspect of it, an interesting storyline with good suspense and sex :) And I'm a straight woman. Nice to have it woven in as it should be, and love the characters.

Cheers

Anon,

There are hints given even before this. You can't go with the "I didn't expect thriller" excuse when it's clearly shown you didn't pay attention to the story.

Yes,it's been 7 years, but I will not let your comment soil this chapter.