All Comments on 'It's You and Me in Here'

But not a bad story .

... written, subtle and poignant. She deserves so much more.

Good story and yes it's sad. You definitely have a talent for writing.

Since I welcome all comments, I'd like to apologize to the anonymous commenter for the inconvenience. Here is the comment according to the best of my memory:

"YAWN. 'Nuff said."

Now that I have your attention, I would like to tell you that you have a blooming writer inside of you. An expressionist! But of words. And someone once had told me, that one could outdo a picture by 1001 words. And believe me, every word of this beautiful piece is that word after the thousandth. Hope you excel in life.

An interesting read. For me, it tries a little too hard with the language in places. But it clearly demonstrates a talent for highly descriptive and evocative writing when controlled.

A short, simple snapshot of a moment. Like I said, you paint a very good picture. Sad, yet sweet.