All Comments on 'Itza, Girl Who Took It All Ch. 01'

by sparky11point5

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fantastic

I really enjoyed this story -- great set up, dialog, and sex. Itza was incredibly hot. Keep it up! When in the next chapter?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Story

It's a good story but it didn't track well. When you put in the section on Lisa, I thought you had gotten lost. Keep up the good work just help us poor readers to understand the story line a bit better.

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