All Comments on 'Ivanovs Ch. 05'

The witch is dead.

Which old witch?

The wicked witch.

Ding-dong

The wicked witch is dead.

Awesome chapter. But why is Krill being charged with a crime? I can't wait to see what happens next. Please hurry with six.

I am so glad the bitch died looking forward to the next chapter

Five. Excellent

I knew that somehow the ole man would come through at the end. I just wished that Krill would have waited a bit longer..hheheh.. I would have loved to see Esmeralda go totally insane before her death. But... that's me. Now, more than just the happy ending I see coming in the next chapter, I suspect that there is more to Eugenia then is what's here. :)

It's a damn good thing you offed her, or else you and I would have had words dear. Great chapter as always. Keep it up!!!!!!

Just gets better with every chapter!!

Great job as always.

This story gets better and better. I wish Esmeralda had been tortured just a little, but at least she died. It can go no where but up now. Next chapter, please.

Ding dong the witch is dead......!

I vote the council gives Krill a ticker tape parade. :)

Beside the protocol involved, Cassius said they were holding Krill for his protection. Could there be Essie zealots still willing to run amock for her dream? There needs to be some mop up, literally and figuratively...

This story gets better with each chapter. Glad Gregor finally saw the deceit in his mate and not in his children.Oh so happy that you killed that bitch. I am looking forwards to the next chapter. I do hope you continue on writing more sequels

OMG... she was one fucked up bitch. I hope Cantar and the chemist can work things out

I've really enjoyed your story so far! Finally, finally; evil Esmeralda is gone (although she is the reason for the great story) and Gernick and Nicky can have their peace. Or, do you have something else hidden up your sleeve? Also, I'm so relieved that Cantar had a solution to the problem her crazy mother caused, but I'm disappointed Nicky distrusted her so much in one of the previous chapters. Although, I understand her need to be wary, cautious and protective for her child. Also, I have a question. Do you plan to hook up Cantar and the chemist? Anyway, I hope Shari's pregnancy runs smoothly and that Garrick and Shari no longer have to feel the pain, loss and disappointment of losing another child. Also, poor Gregor. Now that is wife isn't convincing him to make bad descisions by terrorizing his eldest son, he isn't such a bad guy. I mean she set this up pretty well and carefully. She took advantage of his trust of her professionalism, but I'm wondering how his wife's MIDWIFE became HIS WIFE. It takes a really backstabbing and conniving bitch to plan that out from day one. Also since Gernick, Garrick, Kale and Cantar survived the pregnancies Esmeralda tried so hard to terminate, it shows strength is within Gregor's bloodline, too bad he has to die. Even though I know you have to wrap up. I'd wish you'd continue this story. Hopefully, as others mentioned, a sequel will pop up. Keep it up!

DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD!!! WHICH OLD BITCH? THE WICKED BITCH!!! DING DONG THE WICKED BITCH IS DEAD!!! im just sorry about the comment i made about the father after i read chapter 4. at least gernick and his father have made peace before gregor dies.

You are a true writer. putting in yourself body and soul.

you know how i feel about this kind of story. but to not credit you for all the work you have put in would be a sin. so for effort, and the fact you are from what i read.

A master that what you write . i would now like to see you with a new kind of story. which from reading others you have wrote. i know you can turn your hand to many kinds of story writing .

other may think so different from me. they have their opinion that may well be different to mine. but taking nothing away from this story. it was and is well, worth a vote of five .none the less.

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Keep up the good writing. Enjoying it.

Yay less threats to the pack an the vamp families I do hope tho that Gregor gets to see his grandson before he dies.

Essie was even worse than we knew. Good riddance to bad rubbish!

THANK YOU. I'M LOVING THIS STORY VERY MUCH. MERE WORDS CAN NEVER EXPRESS MY LOVE OF THIS STORY SO I DID THE NEXT BEST THING I TURNED MY BFF'S ON TO THIS SITE AND THIS STORY. THEY'RE LOVING IT ALSO.