All Comments on 'Ivanovs Ch. 07'

I hate to see this one end and can not wait to read the next installment

Please please let us hvae the new story soon. I am so hooked on the stories that I sometimes have to reread them. Wonderful writing. Look forward to the next story and especially Margaret and Lakota.

If you look at a mated pair they actually look after each other and there is plenty of snapping,snarling and sometimes biting when one annoys the other. With the way hes trying to put Margret in a box,Im really surprised his wolf is even dealing with him to be honest.

The emotional rollercoaster glided to the station as skilful as a swan on the loch.

There are so many paths open before us now like the breath taking views at the crest of a hill.

Overall very commendable in sustaining a narrative thread and level of interest over a long haul. Your cast of characters is so large that it can be difficult for the reader to keep them all straight, and some of the names do not help: Garrick and Gernick, in particular, are so close that confusion is inevitable. On a minor note, the correct term is "sisters-in-law", not "sister-in-laws"; one can peek into a room or peek into one's thoughts, emotions can peak, but one's interest in something is piqued. As for the baby names, Heaven and Nevaeh - we get the joke, but it is a bit too cutesy, IMHO. ( At least it is not Blue Ivy) Good job and keep writing.

LOL You now have my attention on Lakota and Margaret. :) Bring it on!

You wrap each story up so nice and pretty with bows on top...and leave a string trailing out of a corner to the next empty box. I think it is the Lit version of The Never-ending Story. :)

I love the idea of wolf-vampire family ties expanding. And good for Margaret! Lakota's wolf won't respect her if she isn't strong. I can't wait to see the confrontation!

Yes,yes lovely chapter but one thing confuses the heck out of me, when you say.... Her wolf heritage demanded it.....How did she get wolf heritage? She fed her blood to Nina and her cubs,which gave the she wolf and her cubs vamp abilities I get that but she did not drink any of Nina's blood so she shouldn't have wolf heritage! No matter how strong the bond they share she didn't drink wolf blood and as far as I know that it the only way she could have gotten wolf heritage. So I am a tad confused!

"I'm not the first woman's whose feelings were hurt by a man"

She breaks his heart but he hurt her?

Traveling hundreds of miles away without so much as a text, then someone tells me they can date whoever they want, this comes after several dates ending only in a "chaste kiss", my first thought definitely isn't true love.

Took me 2 nights to read she wolves and the Ivanovs. Lost a lot of sleep but it's some of the best stories I've read in years. Thank you for your efforts and I'll be waiting for more.

wow another wonderful story with a happy ending ......fantastic .Thanks for a good time ......now write some more ..

Stephen J