All Comments on 'Izzy and Me'

Enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Jerry in SW Washington State, USA - I rarely read brother / sister incest stories because, most of the time, it's mainly about the sex. You were very true to life in how you explored the characters' conflicts. You let the story slowly develop without rushing to the end. You avoided the trap of them getting together as lovers immediately after the massage scene sex. You made me care about them and hope for their happiness. A very satisfying story that I know I will enjoy re-reading again and again. Thank you for a very human story.

An excellent portrayal of heartfelt emotions, manifested through a true love for each other. A really beautiful story.

It shows that there is more to literotica than meets the eye. Well done!

This my friend is a first for me to be responding yo a Literotica submission. You're story was very captivating and compelling to say the least. Please keep up the good work.

good story but i really didn't like the anger in the middle it was probably needed but i don't like it just the same just glad it worked out for them and that you didn't allow the anger to ruin everything like so many other writers do maybe a short second chapter would be worth writting to let us know how things go for them later on

Very passionate and compassionate, especially near the end. I do think you could have mentioned him pulling back his long hair a little less often; once the subject of his hair is broached, any other mention of it is either bragging or just being verbose.

Still a really good story, though!

This story was amazing. The end was happy, but also realistic.

I thought it was moving, tender and very good. You held my attention all the way through the story. It seemed well planned, well plotted and well executed. Thank you for a few moments of entertainment.

I love happy endings and the concept of the story seemed very real.

The characters seemed to just come alive in the story, and very believable.

Well done

You can get this sort of feeling if a guy wrote this.

Excellent job, I'll be hanging out for your next one, so rare to get something that moves me this much.

At the risk of repeating myself, Excellent, excellent, excellent

that is the only way to describe this story

Bravo, and Encore please. A well written and compelling story.

Thank You for sharing your talents with us.

Digdaddyrich from Ohio, pretty much said it as well as I ever could. It was really well written and expressed real feelings. I enjoy sibling incest tales, but I love a beautiful sibling love story and this was one of the best. Thank you so much for sharing your very real talent and please keep posting beautiful stories like this one. Even a sequel would be nice.

What a well written story! It captivated me till I was finished.

The character development was great! I wish there was a bit more dialougue between Paul and Izzy. But hey it worked!

The story brought the welled up eyes a few times so well done!

It was a beautifull love story that was worth every minute it took to read it.

I wish there would be stories like this in the LW category.

Thanks for writing!

nice, i loved it and enjoyed it, so romantic and fucking nice

<3 plz more !! plz

one of the best i have read. Pliz continue ur good work

That was such a beautiful and unique story. I'm wiping away happy tears as I type since the ending was so touching and sweet!

Wonderful character development - authentic characters with real emotions. Hope to see more of your work!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!! Please continue!!!

Absolutely perfect.

Fantastic story! It has all of the elements of great stories; love, beauty, hardship, and triumph. If only life were this perfect. Please keep writing. I look forward to more of your work.

i really don't think he would forgive izzy and sure would go back to her she wanted him to move on so he did when she got in the shower with him any guy in that situation would have told her to get out that he didn't need her and she sure didn't need him keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic please

way to rushed from the time greg entered the picture til they moved out together should have taken years not weeks. after greg got involved with her he would have found a job and moved out only comeing home when he was sure izzy wasn't home slow down and keep it realistic NOONE acts this way or this quickly. he would have felt betrayed and abandoned he sure wouldn't go out and find a girl friend he would avoid girls even more ONCE BITTEN TWICE SHY.

DBRS

I really enjoyed the story, and contrary to one of the comments I can see it happening this way. People will but aside anything if they love someone enough.

One of the best story I have ever read.

The depth of emotions, love, and caring was too immense.

The character build up was also very nice.

I was glued to the whole chapter from the first to the last word.

And also the story length was good neither too long nor too short.

I loved it very much and also enjoyed the desired and very loving ending.

Keep the great work going.

Thanks...

It's harelip dummy, not hair lip. Now pay attention from now on. If Greg had a hair lip it would have been called a mustache,

Pierced your lips did you? Bet that got your immediate attention.

I've been reading on Literotica for quite a few years and this is one of the best if not the best and most touching stories I have read here. I think you have told your story with the love you feel for these two

Original. Very touching.

First time I've commented on a story and first time I've read every word.

Moving, erotic and wholly believable. A good story and an extremely talented author.

Thank you

Total Rubbish

I was touched as i read the story it wasn't all about sex it was about love and passion and i thought it was a very nice story he so many people look at some one who is disfigured or something but they dont look at the true person on the inside hope to read a part two.

it started good and ended good but the middle killed it no guy would ever forgive her that fast. once greg entered the picture he would move out and avoid her at all costs because he would feel she betrayed him and his love for her. no way he would find a girlfriend he would be afraid it would happen again. do a rewrite and fix the major screwup in the middle then it would be worth rereading. as is this fails big time no one including family act this way stop rewriting human nature.

Ignore the one's saying it was rubbish, if they did not like it then they should not have finished reading it, also just because the author did not know the correct term for the boys deformaty does not mean the anon commenter has to be a fucking cunt about it. Get over it.

Good one..... It almost felt like a movie!!!!! one of the best I have ever read.

you started good but ruined it when greg entered the picture. once she started to see greg you rushed the whole story. from the time greg entered the picture to the time he forgave izzy should be spread out over years not weeks or a month. there is no way he would want anything to do with izzy once she started to see greg and no way in hell he would find a girlfriend. delete and do a rewrite fixing the RUSHED MAJOR SCREWUP in the middle

A true love story that I thoroughly enjoyed

I thought your story was beautiful. Great lead in, great setup, and great conclusion. Well done

Honestly that was a brilliant story and i genuinely loved but the ending was not written well. I liked the outcome but it seemed a little rushed at the end and the bit with the JoP seemed kinda tacky. 4*

sweet, poignant and a nice reminder about how to love. Well done

It wasn't easy to find someone to love me. People with obvious disabilities were looked upon with pity and with a little bit of subconcious revulsion when I was young. There weren't many wheelchair ramps, handicap friendly restrooms or tables at restraunts. If there were laws to help protect or make life better for the disabled back then, they were at most paid lip service. And never in front of me. Someone took me aside when I was 19 and explained, confidentially, that I wasn't getting a job, not because of my lack of experience as so many of my classmates were hearing. But because I was a real bad insurance risk. The Military did not want me. I thought no woman would either. But she did. Love should never be squelched no matter where it comes from. It might never come again if you do. This is beautiful.

If I could give this story FIFTEEN stars, I would.

If it was true, I'd call it one of the most heart-breakingly loving stories, I'd ever read.

If it is fiction . . . . somebody has a rare talent.

Loved it.

Amazing... this is perhaps the greatest story I've ever read on Literotica. It was heart-warming. It left me with a feeling of joy by the end of it. I hope you write more in the future, this is definitely QUALITY work! Well done, professional, and erotic. Absolutely splendid!

I never get tired of rereading it when I run across it again!

Very emotional! Total sucker for these types of stories.

5 stars

Best love story I’ve ever read.

One of the best erotic stories about real love between brother and sister 5 stars. But uncomfortable for usual strokers.

This is one of the best stories I've read that deals with any form of incest, loved it 5 stars *****

Best sibling love story I’ve ever seen on this site! 5⭐️

Outstanding!! I hope you've got a few more like this up your sleeve because I'd happily pay for it. Great writing, great description, great character development... wow!

WOW... Brought tears to my eyes

What a beautiful love story. I think is great that you wrote a story that included someone disabled. I’m especially glad that you wrote about someone with CP. It sad that people (more often than not) base their opinion about someone’s intelligence based on the a person’s physical appearance. I hope that this story will touch someone’s heart to not be so quick to judge a person’s intelligence by their physical appearance.

GREAT STORY .......5 STARS IN MY OPINION.. BRAVO.....BRAVO