All Comments on 'Jack and Alison Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Juvenile

Shit! Absolutely puke inducing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Proofread

Heals are attached to your foot. Heels go on your feet. Punctuation, commas, semi colons, tend to help break up run on sentences. Redundancies are also easily avoidable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SO FUCKIN GREAT

EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS PERFECT

Like no joke it is so hard to find public vibrator stories that are THIS good anymore. I love this.

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