All Comments on 'Jack and Jill'

Gave it a chance and I'm glad I did, not a huge fan of cock cages and was unsure where the story was gonna go for a bit but it definitely paid off. I hope you decide to continue writing some kinky stories about at least Jill and Ali, Fiona would be the cherry on top though. Awesome story.

Fiona did rather steal the show here. She appears in earlier tales but not so dramatically.

It would be interesting to see what happens with Jill, though.

really hope you can expand on this brilliant stuff .what else is there to say .thank you for this.

One day I will.

Glad you like it - thanks for commenting.

Read this out of curiosity, but wow, what great writing! Love your sensitivity for both the subject and participants.

Thanks! :-)

I'm not really into incest and this was a personal challenge to try writing it. I didn't set out to cross so many moral lines, though.

and I don't mean that in a good way either.

Huh? Who? What? Why?

I would love to be your Jill anytime.

I'm not sure I could handle two Jills, but gosh... what a thought.

Thank you reading & commenting! :-)

One commenter described Ali as a Bitch,but in all honesty Ali just didn't realize Jack was actually a Futanari instead of a Sissy,but Fiona set Ali straight and told her Jack was a natural Futa at heart.Then Ali didn't have to dominate Jill so much because Ali fell in love with Jill after Ali came back.

Although I am not sure what that means for Ali and Fiona,whether Fiona finally accepted Ali's marriage proposal and Ali,Fiona,and Jill lived a happy threesome relationship together,and they all loved each other as three females I don't know,but I hope they did and Jill gave Ali and Fiona many babies with her futa-cock.

I can't deny that Ali was initially cruel, in the way an older sister in a bad mood can be towards her little brother, but also she did believe she was making him live out his fantasy.

As for what happens next: We've yet to discover what happens to Jack/Jill, but Ali discovers love in The Futa Ring series.

Such a hot story! I loved it. You come up with excellent kinky ideas! Great imagination.