All Comments on 'Jack & Sarah Share a Bed Pt. 02'

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B3amm3upscottyB3amm3upscottyalmost 7 years ago
Nice

Nice short story. I loved both part 1 and part 2.

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Enough WAITING....Show how much you want to make love

He loves you...You love him

and WE LOVE THIS STORY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Another ass hole writer

Who never finish a story

aRandom1aRandom1almost 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Another ass hole writer

That's a bit unnecessary, the introduction clearly references that this is part of a series of stories. Sorry if you didn't read that part or aren't happy with the well worn story telling model of the cliff hanger but if you wait a few days the final part of the story will be ready and waiting for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Part two was just as delicious as the first chapter :)

gep262gep262over 6 years ago
HOT

Oh fuck yes this is now got me in such suspense that i am heading for part 3

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