by candyland143
The writing isn't bad. I think you'd benefit greatly if you'd find yourself a good editor.
As I read this I got hilarious flashbacks of those stop-motion Christmas flicks. Don't think I'll ever look at that old fat Bastard in tha jolly suit th a same way again. 1 or 2 typos, but didn't notice em' as I read. All in all, pretty damn funny read. Although the Santa doing an elf...lol I'm gonna need therapy after THAT visual.
Good one, packed with...er...holiday cheer...lol