All Comments on 'Jack Frost and Mrs. Claus'

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chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Three Stars***

And a three pieces of coal. You know Santa do not play!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This could have been good...

The writing isn't bad. I think you'd benefit greatly if you'd find yourself a good editor.

CrimsonPen1342CrimsonPen1342over 8 years ago
The original merry fucking christams...lol

As I read this I got hilarious flashbacks of those stop-motion Christmas flicks. Don't think I'll ever look at that old fat Bastard in tha jolly suit th a same way again. 1 or 2 typos, but didn't notice em' as I read. All in all, pretty damn funny read. Although the Santa doing an elf...lol I'm gonna need therapy after THAT visual.

Good one, packed with...er...holiday cheer...lol

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