All Comments on 'Jackie and Jill'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
joe

Like...sloppy Joe. Very sloppy. Need attention to detail, and a proofreader.

chytownchytownabout 8 years ago
I Had To Give Four Stars****

For the man with a 5 by 8 cock getting ready to fuck red haired blue eyed twins.!!!! Damn that Jack Daniels must have been flowing when you sat down to write this story. Thanks for sharing. SMH

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

The assumption being that the twins fucked poor Mike to death... what a way to go.

WOW! Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

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I recently lost my muse! She would e-mail some of her experiences and once in a while, send a photo of her to remind me of her looks, and i would build a story around her! some were private and some i published. Now i am in search of a new inspiration. If any lady or ladies wo...