All Comments on 'Jack's Women Ch. 03'

I want to be jack. Keep up the great work.

Love this chapter! Keepem comin! Thanks for sharing.MORE! MORE!

The story just gets better and better.

I didn't have high hopes for this when I started, just looking for a little distraction. You have, however, hooked me in. I agree with the other comments, this just keeps getting better with each new submission. Keep 'em coming!

Cant wait to hear more of Jack and his Girls.

wondering if Ex or old GFs make a visit after they settle in?

Please learn the difference between you're and your otherwise you're doing well.

Great story but get an editor. It's 'your' not "you're".

yeah there are some obvious writing errors but hot story all the same..

You are a true artist. I like them. After I'm done writing this I'm going to tell all of my friends. Thank you for your GREAT pieces of ART.

nice story...but...it's your...not you're