All Comments on 'Jack's Women Ch. 07'

LOVE THIS STORY! More chapters PLEASE!

Inconsistent with his sexual energy

This started as a good story, interesting, with compelling action, intrigue, good deeds -- but it has ever since descended into one boring description of fucking after another. The main character, Jack, has seemingly lost all the good qualities that he demonstrated in the beginning and is now just another uncouth, boring sob. If there have been saving moments, they've come from the good natures or qualities of some of the women.

I agree keep those chapters coming, it just gets better and better.

Yoru work is terrific. I wonder why you have stopped this story? Please continue...

Thanks You

Cant wait too see where Jack's job takes him. and does he come back un-hurt. Do any of the girls go home to stay.

does Jack have to save a girl or two a second time.

How about finishing up this story line while you work on your other story......

I think Jack needs to get back to taking care of the girls and getting them set up financially for the rest of their lives should something happen to him. Get him focused on taking care of the girls, having a bunch of kids and slowing is life down. Have the girls go home to their families and then come back and settle into their new lives. Keep them completely away from involvement in their old lives and anybody that knew them. There are so many things they, and Jack can do now that this story needs to start ramping up again.

Well done!

This is developing into an excellent storyline.

You still keep assaulting the English language, but not to the same extent as in the early chapters.

You have the potential to keep tis story going for many more chapters and I hope you feel capable of this. You obviously have a ggod narrative judgement,and the pace of development is well guaged. One or two scenarios are too far-fetched to be believable, but they do not detract from an impressive overall storyline.

I do apologize for not submitting anything new on this story. To be truthful, I haven't had the time to write much on it since I submitted Chapter 7. I have done a little, but it's not ready. The other story I've submitted, Telepath King was farther along and I guess easier to submit it than to keep writing. Plus, work and family life have played a big role in not being able to continue with Jack and the girls. I promise though, I will return to it as soon as I can, hopefully within the next couple of weeks if not sooner and maybe shortly thereafter, a few more chapters will be up.

I know I've been abusive when it comes to grammar and I am sorry. I'm a novice and admittedly so, eager to put my work up for you all. I can't get my wife to read my stuff and am happy when I get good and bad comments from you all. It just makes me want to write more. So, stroke my ego okay? That's about the only thing that gets stroked anymore!

I've been really enjoying this story and look forward to many more chapters. I fully understand about time constraints, family obligations, etc. so just take your time and submit whatever and whenever you can. I'll be waiting patiently. As an aside, Telepath King is also one of my favorite stories and I look forward to more chapters on it also. Thanks for all of the hard work.

just wondering if you are going farther with this story

Please continue the story

Sean

You're back! Please write more about Jack!! Wonderful story...I'm going to start reading Telepath King now.

pleassseee add to shory TANKS, sqhead

I hope you keep writing more!!! This is a good series!!!

nice more more!!!!!

Well constructed and generally well written. One hiccup "YOUR" and "YOU'RE" you mix up frequently. If you can say "You Are" then use "YOU'RE" eg "You're thinking", the other is the possessive "Your thoughts".

Looking forward to more tales.

This story got "LOST IN THE TRANSLATION"

Loved the story please keep adding to it

Ok why didn't you finish the story

If I had known this was unfinished I would never had started it.

Good story but why didn't you finish it before you started another one?????

No.

Just no.

So many different ways you can go with this. Too many avenues to expand on. You need to come back and finish this.

This has so many ways to go, so many sub plots and main themes that need to be explored. Please come back and thrill us all. JT

This needs to continue!!!