All Comments on 'Jade's New Art'

The premise is simple, the detail of the training is well thought out - I think as a short story or the first chapter it can work - but the development of Jade could use a little more work as a complex character; as of now she's a little generic in her depiction of why women hate men.

what if this took on a more sci-fi-ish bent; i.e. Jade's formative years and what made her what she is...then other developments such as, she trains a whole army of women and they take over and how they take over, in a subtle way...teeheehee (laughing evilly)

Should have been called Garbage.

The Idea is great, but the story lacks ... well an actuall story. It read like an rocky-style training scene. Have Jade attack men at night in parks/dark alleys or show us how she trains other women.

Crap story, Jade needs to be taught how to respect people in general. A couple of slaps to the face should help.

You should write more of Jane's adventures

Different concept. Loved Jade, though short. Would like a series on Jade.