All Comments on 'Jade's Story'

An old TV show called Naked City.. "there are 8 million stories in the naked city and this is just one of them." Close to the actual wording... I am older than dirt and this one is a true presentation of an near actual event.

There is a saying about work place relationships.

Do all you like outside work, but screwing in the copy room in office hours?!?!

Please. ...

An enjoyable quick read but what's with the lines?

Like so many writers here you have a good start to a potentially good a story and then end your writing! You could bring the husband in to get his take on things? Continuing on the story line....Brad might laugh at her for thinking marriage? Is she even too old for Jack....most likely just another piece of MILF ass? Should hubby get some revenge or will she do it to herself when she realizes what she gave up? So why stop now!