All Comments on 'Jake and Cali Ch. 01'

Have you posted this on another site? I feel like I've read this before.

Have I mentioned Editor?

You never quite mention what race Cat is?

Thanks for the comments guys.

1. I haven't posted it on another site. The second one is pending approval. I hope you will keep reading and tell me it doesn't continue to sound like another story. :)

2. Thank, I do need to look into an Editor or at least proofing my own... I have a bad habit of writing while under the influence of alcohol.

3. Sorry. Cali is white. I have an issue of thinking everyone can see the story as I see it, even when I haven't written everything down that I'm thinking. but I really appreciate all the comments. Please keep em coming!